The Feeling that I CAN FEEL..................

arfin99 · June 12, 2003, 9:55am

I say ‘I LOVE YOU’
as I really do care.

I can feel your feelings.
as I have been there.

I feel heaven holding your hands
as I want to stay in your heart

I wish it lasts forever
as my soul is your part

I want to look into your eyes
as i know where stars lie

I want them to say Hello
as they never wants me to say goodbye

I know that you are the only one
as there can be more like me

I can be a prisoner of your heart
as your heart never lets me free

Black_Mamba · June 12, 2003, 12:40pm

:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 12, 2003, 6:29pm

good one :k:

Philanthrope · June 12, 2003, 7:10pm

SO lovely :~)

arfin99 · June 13, 2003, 7:23pm

Thank u all,,,
I submited this poem on POETRY.COM, it was one of the finalist ,, so i thought i should share this poem here,,

masoom_angel · June 13, 2003, 7:28pm

beautiful:k::k:
thanks

arfin99 · June 13, 2003, 8:27pm

Thanx to u 2 Masoom Angel

Dania · June 13, 2003, 9:43pm

:k:

BrokenSky · June 13, 2003, 10:08pm

Buhat Achay:k:..

arfin99 · June 14, 2003, 4:03pm

**
Thanx DANIA and BS,, thanks a lot guys.. **

Philanthrope · June 14, 2003, 4:35pm

wow…thats really wonderful… I have also submitted my poem “Thoughts” and it was selected in semi final…

Well All the best.. :k:

arfin99 · June 14, 2003, 4:56pm

Thanx P}{ä®mä©Ï§t

good to hear abt ur poem as semi finalist,,
can u share with us here,, I will be waiting for ur reply

maheen_sajid · June 15, 2003, 11:18am

zabar dast excellent

arfin99 · June 15, 2003, 12:34pm

Thanx Maheen

ghazal_kisi_ke · June 15, 2003, 9:07pm

nice1:k::k:

arfin99 · June 16, 2003, 11:06am

Thank you GHAZAL KISI KI,,,

amirbilal · June 16, 2003, 11:31am

that is very nice

best regards

arfin99 · June 16, 2003, 1:37pm

thanx AmirBilal

arfin99 · June 17, 2003, 8:21am