THE CAGE!

I dont know where i am, who i am, what i am …i dont even know why i am still breathing and still Alive… I think i am lost…i am lost…lost..lost.. lossssst! I open my eyes and i look around helplessly as if i am in a search of something..restless and helpless..Then i look up..I find someone staring at me. i can see a glimpse of saddness in her eyes. Her eyes told a story of loneliness. I wonder what grief is she englufed in. For some reason, I want to see her smile.She looks weak..it seems as if she will fall down any second. I want to talk to her and tell her that life is not as pathetic as it seems. May be there is more to life. There is a familiar innocent look to her face. I wonder if i know who she is..i cant think no more…i cant..it hurts to even think now…its no use.. she looks unimaginably frail..I want to hold her hand and tell her that she’s not alone. I will support her and be friends with her…never let her feel isolated again. I want her loneliness to end and mines too…I offer my hand for friendship but before i could do that something happens! and i lose my consciousness… …I wake up and all i see is a dark room filled with silence…no wait, i think i see something moving…It is dark..i am scared…i sit still..Soon i realize it was my own shadow moving in this empty room…I think i feel some strength of recovery.I think i can walk now..My eyes wonder around to see if she was there…i cant find her. May be i scared her.Its dark now. Its hard to see things… i cant rememeber where i saw her… Ah! It hurtsss…i dont want to think now.. I look behind me, she is right there staring at me..But this time she looks scared and even more weak.I go close to her so that i can feel her existence..so that i know that she is not a dream or a shadow or any kind of illusion.SO that i know she’s real…yes real..so i go closer..to tell her that i am not here to harm her. As i move my hand forward, she moves her hand towards me aswell.. May be she wants to be friends with me too. i find something between us..Something seperating my hand from hers… Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo..Nooooooooooo it cannot be..It can’t be ..i can taste the salty water on my lips.There is nothing i can do to stop these tears. …They have always been with me to remind me of ma solitude.. I want to run away from her now..I want to go far far away from her..because I cant …i cant be friends with her.. i cant be friends with my own reflection… with my own loneliness!

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MY question is...story main kiya howa...can anyone explain???

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i see a lil scared girl:chai:

ok now seriously …

i see a person running away from his own self

he or she doesnt want to bear the burden of hi/her own sorrows and run away fron his ownself

:chai:

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LOLL>>NOPE>>!

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jawab dey doon???

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ji zaroor:chai:

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anywyas this story is abt a girll...Jo bechaari najanay kab se itni tanha hai aur itni kamzoor ho chuki hai shayad itnay ghumoon ki wjaah se...khair..k ussay kuch yaad nahi hota..and woh sochna bhi nahi chahti k kiya ho rhaa hai coz zehan pe zyada zorr nahi daal sakhtii.. yeh uss larki ki haalat hai jo baar baar behosh horahihai..khud sochlain behosh honay se 5 mins pehely insaan kuch bhi kaisay soch sakhta hai. anywyas.. Then ussay kamray main ussay koi larki nazar atii hai..woh throii sii khush hojaati hai k chaloo ussay apnay jaisa koi tanha mila and she can go b friends with her aur sab acha hojayega...ek umeed miltii hai...eventhough she knws woh itni kamzoor hai ..itni strenghth nahi woh khud bakhud uss alrki ki tarah kheenchay chalii jaati hai ..just coz...of her desperation...and den ...jab woh dosti k liyee haath bhardatii hai she realises ...k uska apna reflection tha mirror main..lol

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hmm…:chai:

i see

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kiya baat hai :D

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WAh Kambal, I thought koi aur 10 pages ki story hogi :p

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baat tu hai.:D

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Does that mean u are gonna consider that? :@:

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Well girl need some vitamins and calcium. She is just weak at every thing.

And yea most importantly … SHE NEEDS A LIFE :smack:

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:cb:

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itni angraizi itni lambi story ! loneliness ki koi baat hai plz anyone gives me the outline !