The 3000th Post :-)

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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As this thread brings my tally to 3000 posts, I hark back and find that while I posted so much of crap, some of my posts turned out to be blockbusters due to overwhelming support of GS members who read me regularly. I, therefore, take a break to thank each and every member of the Poetry forum for their untiring support and encouragement to me. I feel proud to be a part of a forum where so many lovely people come and give me a chance to learn from each one of them. Thanx a lot for making my stay at GS an exciting one. Thanx everyone for everything.:flower1::slight_smile:

I wrote this poem around a month ago for a friend of mine who was
going through some personal problems. I pray to the God Almighty that
He blesses everyone with the blanket of His blessings so that no one has
to stand any test of courage. I also wish/pray that my friend overcomes
all of the problems and return to life asap!!!

Qudrat ka kaar’khaana

Qudrat ke kaar’khaaney meiN
bohat kuch seekhna parrta hey
haalaat ki chakki meiN pis kar
kaheeN phir log bantey heiN
yehi wo log heiN saarey
ke jin sey dunya chalti hey
par koi bhi khaas nahi hota
zakhm to sab ko miltey heiN
dard bhi sab ko hota hey
magar ye dunya hey pyaare
yahaaN koi roney waaley ke
aaNsu saaf nahi karta
marzi ho ya na ho
yahaaN to jeena parrta hey
rona bhi acha hota hey
magar din raat aaNkhoN sey
rim-jhim theek nahi hoti
khayaal to rakhna parrta hey
zara sa haNsna parrtta hey!

Zamaaney ke sataaney sey
jo sapney toot jaatey heiN
unki kirchiyaaN chun kar
khud ko zakhm nahi detey!
haalaat ke kachey rastoN par
zindagi chalti rehti hey
chot bhi lagti rehti hey
zaahir hey dard bhi hota hey
magar takleef ke honey sey
apni taqdeer ko roney sey
masla hal nahi hota
kooft to khaasi hoti hey
magar waqt ke haathoN meiN
shifaa bhi kaafi hoti hey
so fiza ki garm baahoN meiN
abar bhi aa hi jaata hey
dil ke tootey kaasey meiN
sabar bhi aa hi jaata hey
magar kuch waqt to lagta hey!

To zara sa muskuraaney sey
logoN sey milney milaaney sey
agar kuch chein milta ho
tumhey ya aur kisi shakhs ko
to bhala kya harj hey pyaare,
khud ko bhool jaaney meiN!
zara si koshih kar deikho
zabardasti ke haNsney sey
bohat acha to nahi lagta
magar phir bhi bura kya hey
yahaaN kab sab hi sacha hey!
ik ik patti chun kar hum
chalo guldaan sajaatey heiN
dukhoN ke zaalim panjoN sey
aao ik haNsi churaatey heiN
waqt ki baatoN meiN aa kar
dukhoN ko godd nahi letey
dukh to miltey rehtey heiN
khushyaaN dhooNdni parrti heiN!!!

By: Amal

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Re: The 3000th Post :slight_smile:

Aymal Awsome like always and gaian no word…:teary3::flower1:aur hamari dua be ap k dost k sath hain God bless her/him…aur UN k prob solve karey amean sum amean..and second congratulation 4 ap ki 3000k…i was about to open new thread but ab yahi he…:slight_smile:

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Re: The 3000th Post :slight_smile:

very nice :k:
and

:hula: congratz :hula:

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Re: The 3000th Post :slight_smile:

both he Aala like hai ap ne:k:
bohtu bohtu mubarek ho for ur 3K:flower1:

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First of all Mubarak... second that whatever you have said is right and thanks for thinking about us...

Nazam is also great.... hopping to see you completing 10,000 with your beautiful poetry....

Khuda aap ko khush rakhay....

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Bohut bohut mubarak ho ..... 3000 posts, Allah aap kay qalm ko behtri our achai kay liay khoob say khoob tar banay (ameen)

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congrats:bhangra:

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*Qudrat ke kaar’khaaney meiN
bohat kuch seekhna parrta hey
haalaat ki chakki meiN pis kar
kaheeN phir log bantey heiN
yehi wo log heiN saarey
ke jin sey dunya chalti hey
par koi bhi khaas nahi hota
zakhm to sab ko miltey heiN
dard bhi sab ko hota hey
magar ye dunya hey pyaare
yahaaN koi roney waaley ke
aaNsu saaf nahi karta
marzi ho ya na ho
yahaaN to jeena parrta hey
rona bhi acha hota hey
magar din raat aaNkhoN sey
rim-jhim theek nahi hoti
khayaal to rakhna parrta hey
zara sa haNsna parrtta hey!

Zamaaney ke sataaney sey
jo sapney toot jaatey heiN
unki kirchiyaaN chun kar
khud ko zakhm nahi detey!
haalaat ke kachey rastoN par
zindagi chalti rehti hey
chot bhi lagti rehti hey
zaahir hey dard bhi hota hey
magar takleef ke honey sey
apni taqdeer ko roney sey
masla hal nahi hota
kooft to khaasi hoti hey
magar waqt ke haathoN meiN
shifaa bhi kaafi hoti hey
so fiza ki garm baahoN meiN
abar bhi aa hi jaata hey
dil ke tootey kaasey meiN
sabar bhi aa hi jaata hey
magar kuch waqt to lagta hey!

To zara sa muskuraaney sey
logoN sey milney milaaney sey
agar kuch chein milta ho
tumhey ya aur kisi shakhs ko
to bhala kya harj hey pyaare,
khud ko bhool jaaney meiN!
zara si koshih kar deikho
zabardasti ke haNsney sey
bohat acha to nahi lagta
magar phir bhi bura kya hey
yahaaN kab sab hi sacha hey!
ik ik patti chun kar hum
chalo guldaan sajaatey heiN
dukhoN ke zaalim panjoN sey
aao ik haNsi churaatey heiN
waqt ki baatoN meiN aa kar
dukhoN ko godd nahi letey
dukh to miltey rehtey heiN
khushyaaN dhooNdni parrti heiN!!! *

So true, beautiful and encouraging :k:

Congrats on the 3000th post :flower1:

May Allah bless your friend (Ameen).

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Wao Amal congrats brother for the excellent work :k:

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wowwww Amal zaberdasttt hamesha ki tarah :k:

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:k: Amazing and Congratulation .:flower1:

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buhat buhat mubarak for completing 3000 posts .......Amal like always it was a pleasure to read your poem .... my prayers are with your friend !!

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what a poem...no words to express how beautiful it is!
and yes 3000 posts is an achievement..keep up the good work:)

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Re: The 3000th Post :-)

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Amal: *
**Qudrat ka kaar'khaana*

Qudrat ke kaar'khaaney meiN
bohat kuch seekhna parrta hey
haalaat ki chakki meiN pis kar
kaheeN phir log bantey heiN
yehi wo log heiN saarey
ke jin sey dunya chalti hey
par koi bhi khaas nahi hota
zakhm to sab ko miltey heiN
dard bhi sab ko hota hey
magar ye dunya hey pyaare
yahaaN koi roney waaley ke
aaNsu saaf nahi karta
marzi ho ya na ho
yahaaN to jeena parrta hey
rona bhi acha hota hey
magar din raat aaNkhoN sey
rim-jhim theek nahi hoti
khayaal to rakhna parrta hey
zara sa haNsna parrtta hey!

Zamaaney ke sataaney sey
jo sapney toot jaatey heiN
unki kirchiyaaN chun kar
khud ko zakhm nahi detey!
haalaat ke kachey rastoN par
zindagi chalti rehti hey
chot bhi lagti rehti hey
zaahir hey dard bhi hota hey
magar takleef ke honey sey
apni taqdeer ko roney sey
masla hal nahi hota
kooft to khaasi hoti hey
magar waqt ke haathoN meiN
shifaa bhi kaafi hoti hey
so fiza ki garm baahoN meiN
abar bhi aa hi jaata hey
dil ke tootey kaasey meiN
sabar bhi aa hi jaata hey
magar kuch waqt to lagta hey!

To zara sa muskuraaney sey
logoN sey milney milaaney sey
agar kuch chein milta ho
tumhey ya aur kisi shakhs ko
to bhala kya harj hey pyaare,
khud ko bhool jaaney meiN!
zara si koshih kar deikho
zabardasti ke haNsney sey
bohat acha to nahi lagta
magar phir bhi bura kya hey
yahaaN kab sab hi sacha hey!
ik ik patti chun kar hum
chalo guldaan sajaatey heiN
dukhoN ke zaalim panjoN sey
aao ik haNsi churaatey heiN
waqt ki baatoN meiN aa kar
dukhoN ko godd nahi letey
dukh to miltey rehtey heiN
khushyaaN dhooNdni parrti heiN!!!

By: Amal
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It's Beautiful, Thanks for sharing Amal ji:~)

Congratulation 3000 Posts, Keep Posting :~)
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very nice :k:

n congratulations bro :flower1:

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mubarak ho Amal bhai :hula:

aur yeh poem seriously bohotttttt hee achi hai :slight_smile:

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Beautiful Amal :k::k::flower1:

& Congratzzzzzzzzzzz On ur 3K :hula::hula:

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beautiful nazm Amal…its great:k:

and congratss on your 3k posts…:slight_smile:

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Bahut bahut mubarak ho on your 3000 post. May you double that and more. Poem is very cute :)