muddii
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Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha
Ussay Tu Yun Bhee Kissee Aur Simt Jana Tha
Vohi Chiragh Bujha Jis Key Lou Qiyamaat Thee
Ussi Pay Zarb Parii Ju Shajar Purana Tha
Matta-e-Jaan Ka Badal Ik Pal Key Sharshaarii
Salook Khavab Ka Ankhoun Say Tajiraana Tha
Vohi Firaq Key Bataain Vohi Hikayat-e-Visal
Nai Kitaab ka Ik Ik Varq Purana Tha
Qaba-e-Zard Nigar-e-Khizaan Pay Sajti Thee
Tabhi Tu Chall Ka Andaaz Khusrovana Tha
Re: Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha…
Vohi Chiragh Bujha Jis Key Lou Qiyamaat Thee
Ussi Pay Zarb Parii Ju Shajar Purana Tha
zabardast :k:
but i dont understand the last sher 
muncho
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Re: Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha....
very nice g
Re: Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha…
Beautiful :k:
muddii
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Re: Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha…
Hmmmmmm ok will try to explain
Qaba is long coat open in the front usully wore by the emperors
Nigar-e-Khizaan means Beauty of Autumn
The long yellow coat added to the beauty of Autumn (desloation)
Thats why its movement was like an emperor (Khusrovana)
Hopefully now u understand:)
muddii
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Re: Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha....
very nice g
Thank u muncho Jii:)
muddii
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Re: Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha…
Thank u:)
Aryaan
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Re: Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha…
Bohat khoob Muddii..:k:
muddii
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Re: Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha…
Thank u:)
Re: Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha....
buhat umda muddii miya.
Re: Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha…
wah muddi.
it was good. :k:
muddii
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Re: Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha....
buhat umda muddii miya.
Thank u Starlight:)
muddii
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Re: Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha…
Thank u:)
Re: Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha....
achi hia muddi sahib :)
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muddii
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Re: Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha....
achi hia muddi sahib :)
Thank u bholi:)
Re: Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha....
zabardast Muddiji....very heavy poem...the kind thats a pleasure to read :)
muddii
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Re: Thakan Tu Aglay Safar Kay Liay Bahana Tha....
zabardast Muddiji....very heavy poem...the kind thats a pleasure to read :)
heavy??? Thank u for liking:)