Thaak Jao Gi

[ghazel_rizvi]

Pagal Ankhoon Wali Lirki
Itnay Manhgay Khuwab Na Dekhoo
Kanch Say Nazuk Khuwab Tumharey
Tot Gay Tu Pachtao Gi
Soch Ka Sara Ujla Kundhan Zabt Ki Rakh May Ghul Jay Ga
Kachey Pakay Rishtoon Ki Khusboo Ka Raysham Khul Jay Ga
Tum Kia Jano
Khuwab Safar Ki Dhoop Kay Teshey
Khuwab Adhori Raat Ka Dozak
Khuwab Khayaloon Ka Pachtawa
Khuwaboon Ki Minzil Roswai
Khuwaboon Ki Hasil Tanhai
Tum Kia Jano
Manhgay Khuwab Khared Na Ho Tu Ankheen Beachna Perti Heen
Ya
Rishtay Bholna Pertay Heen
Andeshoon Ki Reet Na Phankoo
Aur Reet Kay Jiltay Sehra May
Pani Kay Qatray Ko Kahan Bacha Paoo Gi Jill Jao Gi
Aur Totay Howay Sheshoon Ko Ab Bhe Chunti Hoo
Darakht Kay Thanday Saay Ko Ab Dhundti Hoo
Ya Sab Ab Kahan Paoo Gi
Aur
Ab Tu Chaltay Chaltay Tum Thaak Chuki Ho
Najany Kitni Door Tum Ja Chuki Ho
Ab Aagay Ja Ker Kia Paoo Gi Pachtaoo Gi
Etnay Manhgay Khuwab Na Dekho Thaak Jaoo Gi

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

kasi hey humari nazam

[fara]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

@ghazel rizvi

Manhgay Khuwab Khared Na Ho Tu Ankheen Beachna Perti Heen
Ya
Rishtay Bholna Pertay Heen
Andeshoon Ki Reet Na Phankoo
Aur Reet Kay Jiltay Sehra May
Pani Kay Qatray Ko Kahan Bacha Paoo Gi Jill Jao Gi
Aur Totay Howay Sheshoon Ko Ab Bhe Chunti Hoo
Darakht Kay Thanday Saay Ko Ab Dhundti Hoo
Ya Sab Ab Kahan Paoo Gi
Aur
Ab Tu Chaltay Chaltay Tum Thaak Chuki Ho
Najany Kitni Door Tum Ja Chuki Ho
Ab Aagay Ja Ker Kia Paoo Gi Pachtaoo Gi
Etnay Manhgay Khuwab Na Dekho Thaak Jaoo Gi

**I have always loved this nazm, it is beyond the measures of praise…

Beautiful work, by the way do u know, who is the poet?

**

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

no i dont fara thori es may mery apni shari hey

[paki123]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

Manhgay Khuwab Khared Na Ho Tu Ankheen Beachna Perti Heen
Ya
Rishtay Bholna Pertay Heen

meangfull poetry, thanks to share with us

[saroo]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

@ghazel rizvi

no i dont fara thori es may mery apni shari hey

thori si apni hay ya sari apni hay … anyway niceone

[paki123]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

@ghazel rizvi

no i dont fara thori es may mery apni shari hey

acchie modification ker lay tee hain app

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

@saroo

thori si apni hay ya sari apni hay … anyway niceone

no thori si hay ji apni thanks to like it saroo ji

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

@paki123

acchie modification ker lay tee hain app

thanks paki123 to like my modification

[nakhan]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

Hmmmm nice one ghazal ji

aap ki modifications highlight honi chahiyen
ta k aap ki skills ka sahi andaza ho sakay

[Maheen2002]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

very nice :-)

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

@nakhan

Hmmmm nice one ghazal ji

aap ki modifications highlight honi chahiyen
ta k aap ki skills ka sahi andaza ho sakay

hi nakhan bhai fara nay jo higlight kia hey that,s mine i think u like it thanks to read it

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

@Maheen2002

very nice

thanks maheen:)

[koiDost]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

Zabardast ! bahut khoob janab

[Golden_Scorpion_1]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

Beautiful…

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

thanks GS bhai AND kd

[Barbie_Girl]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

hmmmmmmmmmmm excellent

but ab kya ho sakta hai.....

[Precious_Khan]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

buhat achchay … nice collection ..thax 4 sharing

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

thanks lala ji and BG too

[nakhan]

Re: Thaak Jao Gi

@ghazel rizvi

hi nakhan bhai fara nay jo higlight kia hey that,s mine i think u like it thanks to read it

Hmmmm nice additions