terii yaad mein sab guzR gaye... shab-0-roz kya. . . maah-0-saal kya !

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

HeArT_HaCKeR July 29, 2011, 1:35pm 1

tujhe naaz haii k mae husan h00n mere gulistaaN ko zawaal kia mujhe fakhR haii k mae ishQ h00n j0 jala na dun tu kamaal kia
mje zindagii kii dua na de
mujhe zindagii kii talab nhe
merii maut ko jo taal de
is zindagii kii majaal kia

hamien manziloN kii khabR nhe
hamien rah-guzR kii talaash hei
us rah-guzr pe nikal parrayy
tu urooj kia, zawaal kia

tere pyaaR mei shikweyy, gileyy
terii in adaa0N pe marr chalayy
jo hayaaT thii tujhe waaR dii
tu jawab kia, aur sawal kiaa

thii jo ik ada-e-dil-barii
saarii umeR ussii pe waar dii

~terii yaad mei sabb guzar gaye. . . .. . shab-0-roz kia, maah-o-saal kiaa . .. . . .~

Amal July 29, 2011, 3:05pm 2

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HH, bohat acha kalaam hey…thanx for sharing it with us :k:

UZ July 29, 2011, 3:59pm 3

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Nice :k:

khawabRung July 29, 2011, 5:37pm 4

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I already post this, nice.

babri July 29, 2011, 6:41pm 5

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Beautiful KR Bhai

HeArT_HaCKeR July 29, 2011, 7:45pm 6

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thank you Amal.

Aryaan July 29, 2011, 10:20pm 7

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Bohat Khoob HeArT HaCKeR..:k:

muddii July 30, 2011, 4:10am 8

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Very nice HH:)

HeArT_HaCKeR July 30, 2011, 8:05am 9

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Aryaan and muddii

Shazia_Arif July 30, 2011, 3:16pm 10

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the font colour is too difficult 2 read :hinna:

KKF July 30, 2011, 3:23pm 11

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Ghazal to bahot umda hai magar yeh kia kiyaa k misro’N ko TukRoN meN baaNT diyaa. kia aapko bhii KhwaabRang BHai kii taraH posting meN masalah hai? maiN ne asl haiyat meN likh diyaa hai.

HeArT_HaCKeR July 30, 2011, 6:29pm 12

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mujhe jis andaaz mein likhne ka dil kere ga mae wese he likhon gi..ap ko jis andaz mein pasand aap wese edit ker k parh lien… and same reply goes to Shazia . .u can change the font color as u wish it 2 b…

KKF July 30, 2011, 7:38pm 13

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dostaana jawaab ke liye bahot bahot shukria…jaisa bahtar samjheN aap magar jo saHeeH baat thii vo bataa di…Khair…be happy!

Shazia_Arif July 31, 2011, 6:56am 14

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don’t b offensive chanda i just explained my prob

Azad July 31, 2011, 7:40am 15

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Uff kitna zehr bhara hai errrrrr :gir ke Behosh hone wala icon: