Teri yaad

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Re-writing this poem after more than 5 years

Teri yaad

Teri yaad
Haan teri yaad
Raat ke pichle pehr
Yun mere dil pe dastak deti hai
Ke jaise kai raaston ka
Thaka, bhatka, be sabra musafir
Achanak se manzil ka pata pa le

Teri yaad
Haan teri yaad
Mere liye mere jeene ka
Kuch iss tarah se hai sahara
Ke jaise kisi muflis ki jholi main bachi
Uski zindagi ki aakhri poonji

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Teri yaad

:hmmm:

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LP aur enter10 ki farmaish pe dobara likhi hai

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Aur 5 saal pehley :hmmm:

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aise hi likh di thi… no one particular in mind.. boht se dost, rishtadar yaad aa jate hain insan ko.. ab us waqt kon tha, yaad nahin

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Bohat Khoob…:k:

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waqai pasand aai.. ya aise hi keh rahe hain :hehe:

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Wah…!!! :lajawab:

bohat achi likhi

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Thanks PK :k:

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aur bhi likhain na

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poor writing ke chaske mat len :naraz:

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Teri yaad

Han aur bhi likhen aur bataye ke abbi tak 'teri yaad' ati hai ya nahi.

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koi mehr nahin koi qehr nahin
phir sacha shair sunaen kia :hinna:

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mufli :yummy:

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ager ap poor writer hain phir hum sub to :sadaf:

ub likhain bhi :@:

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ek aur chaske baaz

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paRhi hui to hain sab aap ne:

http://www.paklinks.com/gs/shora-e-gupshup/505121-ghazal.html

http://www.paklinks.com/gs/shora-e-gupshup/505124-khwab-gharonday-nazm-2.html

http://www.paklinks.com/gs/shora-e-gupshup/529768-chehra-shanaas.html

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Teri yaad

:hayaa:

Behoo behoo

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:clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:

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ye bhi hai:

http://www.paklinks.com/gs/shora-e-gupshup/529774-dastak.html