teri hi tarhaN hamain yaad aaney waala ho ..

Azam_1 · October 29, 2002, 7:06am

Eik shiqwa or teen mukhtalif andaaz-e-bayaan :~)

now choice is yours

**Original Version**

teri hi tarhaN hamain yaad aaney waala ho ..
tere siwaa bhi koi to sataane waala ho ..

har ek subha yahi dil main hook uThti he ..
hamain bhi naaz se koi jagane waala ho ..

wo kis ummeed main ghar mey rahain ki jis ghar main ..
na aaney waalaa ho koi, na jaaney waala ho ..

har eik se nazarain milaai hain un ke koochey main ..
ki jaise ab koi, ham ko bulaane waala ho ..

he dosto ke liye aainaa nazar meri ..
nazar milaaiN jo nazarain milaane waala ho ..

ki jaise koi balaa mujh pe aaney waali he ..
hiraas kehta he, koi bachaaney waala ho ..

hamaare shehar main, kya kya saje-sajaaye hain ghar ..
hamaare ghar ko bhi koi sajaane waala ho ..

By
Mohtaram Karaar Noori

Heres my self pity edition

raat tanhai ki, jab saans bhi karey baatain ..
koi to saath hoo, inkoo samajhney waala ho ..

khizaaN ke daur main, jab phool sarey murjhain ..
singhaar kar ke koi, mausam badalney waala ho ..

koi aaNgan main mere aaye rooshnie ki tarhaan ..
kisi ko apna kahoon, koi apna kehney waala ho ..

zamaana laakh meri zaat ko kamzoor karey ..
ik oska saath, meri himmat barhaney waala ho ..

thakan sey choor jab main rasta bhatakney lagoon ..
koi kaandhey pe mere haath rakhney waala ho ..

jahan awaaz meri saath choor de mera ..
wo eik shakhs, meri ankhoon ko parhney waala ho ..

bohot safar hey mere haath ki lakeeroon main ..
koi to ho, jo mere saath chalney waala ho ..

By
Azam

Now check out another version

ik garam chai ki piyaali hoo ..
koi osko pilaney waali hoo ..

chahey goori ho yaan kaali ho ..
seeney sey laganey waali ho ..

tara rum pum pum ..
tara rum pum pum ..
tara tum pum pum ..

By
some Sardaar ji

_Masoom_Muskaan · October 29, 2002, 9:46am

org wali to zahir hei achei hi hho gi na ab werna app apni poetry na likh saktei

app ki poetry bhi bohttt achei hei kyon kei app nei likhi hei:k:

no 3 bhi achei hei bcoz sardar je nei likhei hei:p funny hei

NikamiJano · October 29, 2002, 9:56am

Re: teri hi tarhaN hamain yaad aaney waala ho ..

b t w nice one pahli wali and ap k ye 2 shar :k:

SunnyBoy · October 29, 2002, 12:58pm

:k:

Kuri_Ptakha · October 29, 2002, 2:42pm

:k: :k:

chand_chehra · October 29, 2002, 3:01pm

Re: teri hi tarhaN hamain yaad aaney waala ho ..

very nice azam gi :k:

arifnawaz1 · October 29, 2002, 4:28pm

Zabardast !!!

Azam_1 · October 30, 2002, 3:43pm

thanks for the reply Masoon Muskaaan .. :~)

Azam_1 · October 30, 2002, 3:45pm

Re: Re: teri hi tarhaN hamain yaad aaney waala ho ..

Shukriya NIkami ji :~)

or main balaaon sey nahi darta after all .. main bhi kisi Baagar billay se kam nahi hoon →

Azam_1 · October 30, 2002, 3:47pm

Re: Re: teri hi tarhaN hamain yaad aaney waala ho ..

Shukriyaa Moon face ji :~)

thanks SunnyBoy, Kuri Ptakha and asifnawaz :~)

ShaRaRa · October 30, 2002, 5:11pm

original ones:k: very nice
urs:k: zabardast
third ones:kiss: sallu made it look good;)

nia_khan · October 31, 2002, 1:33am

Nice :)

Lamhay · October 31, 2002, 8:28am

bahut khoob azam ji

lost_soul · November 1, 2002, 5:09pm

Thanks for sharing Azam. The first one is really good. :)
As for the second one thats not bad either. :)

nikii · November 1, 2002, 7:39pm

nice ist n 2nd :k: