teRi doori'yaaN b azaab haiN meRi dasht e jaa'N say tali nahiN

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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teRi qur’bataiN b saraab haiN ye bhala hua jo nahi milee’N
teRi doori’yaaN b azaab haiN meRi dasht e jaan say tali nahiN

kisi aag nay wo dhu’aan dee’aa mujhay daikhnay b kahaN dee’a
wo musafatooN ka jahaN dee’a kahiN rasta hai kahiN nahiN

mujhay zindgi wo di’yaa lagay k abhi bujhay jo hawa lagay
kabi kia lagay kabi kia lagay kisi zaa’viye pay yaqee’N nahiN

k shikasta paa maiN rukooN kahan ye hai fasloon ka naya jahaN
hai agaR zamee’N nahi aasma’N ,hai jo aasma’N tou zamee’N nahiN

pas e chashm e nam wo zaRor hai mera dil jafa’OoN say chooR hai
meRi manzilooN ka qasooR hai teRay rastooN say milee nahiN

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Re: teRi doori'yaaN b azaab haiN meRi dasht e jaa'N say tali nahiN

woww!! the flow and the words are awsome loved it.

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[quote=“NikamiJano, post:358, topic:170906”]

teRi qur’bataiN b saraab haiN ye bhala hua jo nahi milee’N
teRi doori’yaaN b azaab haiN meRi dasht e jaan say tali nahiN

sari ghazal achi hai lakin ye shair bohat acha hai :k:

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mujhay zindgi wo di’yaa lagay k abhi bujhay jo hawa lagay
kabi kia lagay kabi kia lagay kisi zaa’viye pay yaqee’N nahiN

umda jee umda :k: :slight_smile:

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Beautiful..

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Its simply beautiful, amazaing, lajawab :lajawab:

smooth flow of words great sharing :k:

poet name ?

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Buhat Khoob Nikam'mi :~)

Classrooom humour hahaha
Classrooom humour hahaha
Classrooom humour hahaha
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ap ne post ke he toh ache he ho ghe :)

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:halo:

;) Choose A Profession 4 Above Person ;)
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thanks pee^K

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:teary2: taref pesend nehe :frowning:

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Re: teRi doori’yaaN b azaab haiN meRi dasht e jaa’N say tali nahiN

ya i know ALi it is ..but unfortunatley poet ka naam i didn’t get it :frowning:
thanks 4 liking :slight_smile:

The Random Thread
The Random Thread
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thanks red :)

~10 saal baad~
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thanks lonley aj kal kahaN hotey koi rola nahi hai :stuck_out_tongue:

~10 saal baad~
~10 saal baad~
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thanks star me loved it too :)

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[quote=“Shab-e-Hijar, post:9, topic:171939”]

thanks shab :)me love that gazal too :slight_smile:

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Beautiful, if its not Amals tu phir stayl is some one same as his :) Beuatiful Words!

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ya me ko b yehi laga tha pahlay nahi parhi kisi board se achi lagi tu copy ki...me b pahlay usi ki samji thei style se ab pata nahi ye us ki hia ya wo kisi ki laey :p... lakin AMal ki hoti tu nazar se guzrti tu :)

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kiya pata Amal ki new new poem ho that he hasnt yet here shared with us :p