Teri baat mukammal thi na meri baat adhuri thi

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Teri baat mukammal thi na meri baat adhuri thi
ye takmeel adhore pan ki payar main buhat zarori thi

to ne yon mehsoos kiya he warna dil main kuch bhi na tha
bas ik teri chahat thi or wo bhi ghair shaori thi

payar k deep jalaye rakhna apni apni rahon par
teri bhi majbori thi or maire bhi majbori thi

mere samne beth k jaise us ne nazar andaaz kiya
kon kahe ga apne dil ki us k dil se doori thi

muhabbat heer aur ranjha tak hi to mahdood nahi
na mare kano main bali na us k haath main chorri thi…!**

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Re: Teri baat mukammal thi na meri baat adhuri thi

**muhabbat heer aur ranjha tak hi to mahdood nahi
na mare kano main bali na us k haath main chorri thi...!

acha hi huwa.. aise log maine bus-stop per dekhe hain.. muhabbat se ek doosre ko dekhte huwe :p
**

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Re: Teri baat mukammal thi na meri baat adhuri thi


you mean feelingless chahat ?

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Re: Teri baat mukammal thi na meri baat adhuri thi

^no

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Re: Teri baat mukammal thi na meri baat adhuri thi

ghair shaori means ?
shuor means feeling

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Re: Teri baat mukammal thi na meri baat adhuri thi

shaour = Aqal/soch

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Re: Teri baat mukammal thi na meri baat adhuri thi

shuor in arabic means feeling..i thought urdu mai bhi same hoga :bummer:

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Re: Teri baat mukammal thi na meri baat adhuri thi

Be-khater kood para aatish-e-namrood mein ishq
Aqal hy mehv-e-tamasha-e-lab-e-baam abhi........

^kush isi terha ka hy........

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Re: Teri baat mukammal thi na meri baat adhuri thi

:hayaa:

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Re: Teri baat mukammal thi na meri baat adhuri thi

Kia howa…?

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Re: Teri baat mukammal thi na meri baat adhuri thi

aise aise alfaz isstemaal ker liye aapne :emmy: