Teri auqaat zindgi hai kya ?

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Mujhko aankhe’n dikha rahi hai kya ?
teri auqaat zindagi hai kya ??

Meri haalat pe aabdeeda ho !
choat dil par kabhi lagi hai kya ??

Tootna juRna phir bikhar jana |
Naam iska hi zindgi hai kya ??

Bik gayi par na bach saka bachcha |
Poochh uss maa’n se bebasi hai kya ??

Kyo’n na mazhab ko bech khaae wo ?
Bhook daulat ki mit saki hai kya ??

Ghar mein JAWED aajkal apney |
Dushmano’n ki koi kami hai kya ??**

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Re: Teri auqaat zindgi hai kya ?

bohat aala

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Re: Teri auqaat zindgi hai kya ?

بہت خوب جاوید بھائی

بہت عمدہ خیالات کی عکاس ہے آپ کی یہ غزل۔

بہت سی داد قبول کیجیے۔

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Hausla-afzaai ka bahot-bahot SHURIYA Ashfaq Bhai

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Mere hauslo’n ko quwat-e-parwaaz ataa farmaney ka behad SHUKRGUZAAR hoo’n FASEEH BHAI !

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nice

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good effort.

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Hatim Bhai.. Boht umda kawish hai. Likhte rahiye aur share karte rahiye. :k:

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*
[QUOTE]
Karamfarmaai ka dil se shukriya.*

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very nice!

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Bhot-Bahot Shukriya.

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HIMMAT-AFZAAI KA DIL KI AMEEQ GAHRAAI SE SHUKRIYA jANAB !

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Behad SHUKRGUZAAR hoo'n,janab!

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hummm

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**
THNKS

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**Meri haalat pe aabdeeda ho !
choat dil par kabhi lagi hai kya ??

Simply amazing :lajawab: keep it up
**

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Bahot-Bahot shukriya SANNAN SB. !

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V niceee

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Bohat Khoob Hatim..:k:

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Thnk u vry mch.