Teri Aankh ko Aazmana paRa

Teri Aankh ko Aazmana paRa
Mujhay qissa e GHam sunana paRa
GHam e zindagi teri KHatir hamaiN
Sar e daar bhi muskurana paRa
Hawadis kee SHab itni tareek thee
Jawani ko saghar uTHana paRa
Meray dushman e jaan, teray wastay
Kaee doston ko bhulana paRa
Zamanay kee raftaar ko dekh kar
Qayamat per imaan lana paRa
JinhaiN dekhna bhi na chahay nazar
UnheeN say talluq baRhana paRa
Kaee saanp thay qeemti is qadar
UnhaiN Aasteen mai chupana paRa
HawaaoN kay tewar jo barham huay
CHiraGHon ko khud jhilmilana paRa

Re: Teri Aankh ko Aazmana paRa

nice :k:

Re: Teri Aankh ko Aazmana paRa

Wah !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Simply Awesome!!!!
Har Shair La-jawaab!!!
:)

Re: Teri Aankh ko Aazmana paRa

wise guy, man.
goodpoem.
yes, ppl do this, run their sadness to cause it in others.

heal thy self, is alot better than contagiously diseasing others.

Re: Teri Aankh ko Aazmana paRa

such a nice poem :k:

Re: Teri Aankh ko Aazmana paRa

tum meRi aankh k taywaR bhula na pao gaye ;)
wesay abhi ap ne sahi ankhiN dekhi kahaN hain:p

PS: nice

Re: Teri Aankh ko Aazmana paRa

hmm achi hai not bad :D

Re: Teri Aankh ko Aazmana paRa

Thank you all :)

Re: Teri Aankh ko Aazmana paRa

wow...!!

i jus hopee sum1 can love anotehr that much in reall..