terey naam

tahreem_saeed · February 24, 2007, 4:06am

surkh gulab k saaray mousam teray naam
har subah ka pehla ujala tere naam
teri yaad k behtay darya meray liay
behti jheel main phool kanwal ka tere naam
jitnay khuwab khuda nay mere naam likhay
un khuwaboon ka raiza raiza tere naam
teri yaad main umer meri beeti beet
ab is umer ka baqi hissa tere naam

kaleemhk · February 24, 2007, 4:42am

Re: terey naam

Very nice........:)

tahreem_saeed · February 24, 2007, 4:45am

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bohat khoob kaleem ji thnaks

Gondal_007 · February 24, 2007, 6:25am

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tereyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaam wow:)

tahreem_saeed · February 24, 2007, 6:52am

Re: terey naam

thannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnkssssss alottttttttttttttttttttttt gondal

rashidali · February 24, 2007, 5:36pm

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Nice

Amal · February 24, 2007, 5:51pm

Re: terey naam

tahreem, amazing piece of poetry :k: Thanx for sharing it with us

SJ · February 24, 2007, 6:20pm

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NICE!

tahreem_saeed · February 25, 2007, 4:03am

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thanks rashidali ,Amal and soniajee

tahreem_saeed · February 25, 2007, 4:05am

Re: terey naam

youn mile k mulaqat na ho saki
hont kampe mager koi baat naa hosaki
meri khamoshi hr baat keh gai
aor unko shikayat hai k baat na ho saki