tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha na sukoon tha na qaraar tha
Yehi umr thee mere hamnasheen ke kisi se mujh ko bhi pyar tha
Mai samajh raha hoon teri kasak, tera mera dard hai mushtarak
Isi gham ka tu bhi aseer hai isi gham ka mai bhi shikaar tha
Faqat aik dhun thee ke raat din usi khaabzaar mai gum rahen
Wo saraapa aisa suroor tha wo khumar aisa khumar tha
Kabhi lamhe bhar ki bhi guftgoo meri us ke saath na ho saki
Mujhe fursaten nahee mil sakin wo hawa ke rakht pe sawar tha
Hum ajeeb tarz ke log thay ke hamare aur bhi rog thay
Mani khizan mein uska tha muntazar use intizar-e-bahaar tha
Use parh ke tum na samjh sake ke meri kitaab ke roop main
Koi qarz tha kai saal ka kai ratjagon ka udhar tha

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Re: tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha

:k: nice ghazal

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Re: tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha

^^ thx

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Re: tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha

very nice .................. :) :)

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Re: tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha

nice sharing :)

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Re: tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha

Sunny Boy. :disgust: I was about 2 post this poem …

Kher,. ab to tareef hi karni paray gi.

Its gr8. :smiley:

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Re: tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha

sunny boy what are you smoking?.. weed?:konfused:

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Re: tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha

Nope … Its … Wheat :smokin2:

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Re: tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha

:yuck:
I’m allergic to wheat :snooty:

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Re: tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha

I am impressed.
I didnt know the Chinese Mafia were so deep. :)

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Re: tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha

every person is different frm inside ( frm Chacha Shakspere )

its life … give n take :wave:

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Re: tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha

then i will prepare ( GARDA ) for u … { The Mother of Hash } :hehe:

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Re: tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha

it's gr8!

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Re: tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha

^^ thx

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Re: tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha

Nice

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Re: tere jaisa mera bhi haal tha

^^ thx