system
August 8, 2002, 3:52pm
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Mein aur
Meri tanhaai
Shabb bhar baatein kartey hain
Chaand, sitaarey, raat ho
Sab meri baatein suntey hain
Rotey hain, hanstey hain
Door ufaq par
Subah ka taara jaisay hi chamakta hai
Aankh mein thehra aakhri aansoo
Chupkey sey beh jaata hai
[This message has been edited by pakbeast (edited August 10, 2002).]
Amal
August 8, 2002, 5:27pm
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Originally posted by pakbeast:
**
tere jaaney k baad.
bohat akeli si hogayee hoon
bas tera hi khayal rehta hai
teri baatein yaad aati hain
khattee meethi laraiyan yaad aati hain
kabhi hunsi tou kabhi rona aata hai
dil bechara beqaabu hojata hai
Dukh teri judaai ka aur muskarahat terey khayal ki hoti hai
terey khatoot apney pan ki khushboo pesh kartey hain
zubaan par tera hi naam rehta hai
dil ke kisi goshey se teri awaaz aati hai
aur ye gumaan rehta hai
k tu saamney hai..par jab aankhen kholeen
tou kuch bhi na thaa
sirf terey khayal ki mashoor kun khushboo se labraiz mera dil thaa!**
It’s indeed coming right from the heart! Nice
work
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Blessed are you that you have such a
caring and loving “someone very special”
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Request her on our behalf to write more like this
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MeiN pal do pal ka shaer hooN…
system
August 8, 2002, 6:01pm
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Thanx Amal
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…i really am very very lucky to have her. She has written some more poems on/for me. I will convey your message
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