tere daaman meiN mere vaaste kyaa kuchh bhii nahiN

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal June 27, 2006, 3:23pm 1

***zindagii tuune lahuu leke diyaa kuchh bhii nahiN ***
***tere daaman meiN mere vaaste kyaa kuchh bhii nahiN ***

***mere in haathoN kii chaa’ho to talaashi le lo ***
***mere haathoN meiN lakiroN ke sivaa kuch bhi nahiN ***

***yaa Khudaa ab ke ye kis rang se aa_ii hai bahaar ***
***zard hii zard hai peiron pe haraa kuchh bhii nahiN ***

***dil bhii ik zid pe araa hai kisii bachche kii tarah ***
yaa to sab kuchh hi ise chaahiye yaa kuchh bhi nahiN

Jhuki_Nigahein June 27, 2006, 3:51pm 2

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nice one koyal :)

Prince_Ali June 27, 2006, 4:07pm 3

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Very nice :k:

Koyal June 28, 2006, 1:00pm 4

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thanks neechi ankhin :)

Koyal June 28, 2006, 1:01pm 5

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thanks prince

saroo June 28, 2006, 2:51pm 6

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Very nice and Jagjit has sung it wonderfully well as well.....Worth hearing

EEMAAN June 28, 2006, 3:13pm 7

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good one..khoob

Amal June 28, 2006, 5:23pm 8

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A typical Koyal ghazal — simply marvelous k:… Thanx for sharing

being_lonely June 28, 2006, 5:55pm 9

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Daanie June 28, 2006, 7:21pm 10

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buhut khoob ji :)

Shab-e-Hijar June 28, 2006, 8:12pm 11

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Beautifulll one jano :k:

Shab-e-Hijar June 28, 2006, 8:13pm 12

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Amalllllll long time no see no new poem where have you beeen??

NikamiJano June 28, 2006, 8:30pm 13

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ap keon UN k leay itna preshan jab wo bina bateiy gayeb they wesay btw khabar lain in ki knee bemaar hai

nice one KOyal

safeena June 28, 2006, 8:37pm 14

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that's v zabardasttt, thanks for sharing..!

sunny_nicky June 28, 2006, 9:08pm 15

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goooooooooood nice haaa

janwar is trying to eat my penguino freind

Koyal June 29, 2006, 3:01am 16

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Really ..koyal ne nahi suni any way thanks:)

Koyal June 29, 2006, 3:02am 17

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shukria an zara nawazi ap ki…an welcome back again nice to see u hear:)

Koyal June 29, 2006, 3:03am 18

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thanks chando g:)

fara June 29, 2006, 7:43am 19

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Zabardast Koyal...

Fara

mahamkhan June 29, 2006, 8:53am 20

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nice one...!