Tere Baghear

Aabi · October 15, 2003, 11:23am

share ur SHAIRY

saawan ki rut he aai wo bhi tere baghear
haseen bahaar guzri so bhi tere baghear

kuch raat to guzar gayi tere khayal mein
kuch raat ki hein raat se baatein tere baghear

wo jo hum ko itna yaqeen tha ke kabhi na honge hum juda
ye jo itne bars guzar gaye so guzar gaye tere baghear

wo ehd-o-peman kiya huye wo jo YAKJA hone ke thay sub
yakja to hum na ho sake tanhaa huye tere baghear

tanhaa nahin he tu abid tanhaai ke is kurb mein
wo bhi to sochte honge tuj ko tere baghear

smilly · October 15, 2003, 12:00pm

wasalam

nice 1:)

BeWaQooF · October 15, 2003, 12:02pm

:k:

abc1234 · October 15, 2003, 6:11pm

aabi

tum aur poetry??? khaireeyat?

tumhari apni nazam hae kya?

btw achee hae

Philanthrope · October 15, 2003, 7:05pm

Wah! and welcome to GS :-)

ghazal_kisi_ke · October 16, 2003, 2:37am

bohut khoob:k:

Aabi · October 18, 2003, 10:04am

kiyoon:konfused: irem baaji.
achi bhali to he:teary1: phir aap kiyoon heraan hein.

abc1234 · October 18, 2003, 10:11am

o naheen aheen aisi koi baat naheen baba ro kyun rhay ho?

bas mujhay naheen pata tha k tum shairi kerte ho na is lyay keh rahi thee

Jaan_Lewaa · October 18, 2003, 1:35pm

bhut achay:k:

Capricorn · October 18, 2003, 3:37pm

Very nice :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 19, 2003, 7:30am

bohat achay :)

Aabi · October 26, 2003, 9:50am

bus kabhi kabhi koi shair ghalti se damaagh mein aa jata he:D