Aik Nazm,
Meri Jaan Meray Ye Roz-o-Shab
Hain Teray Sabab
Meray Dil Main Jitna Bhi Pyar Hai
Ye Jo Chahaton Ki Phu’aar Hai
Hai Teray Leay
Meri Jaan Magar
Meri Shakh’siat Ka Nikhaar Aur
Meray Dil Ka Saara Sukoon, Sab
Hai Teray Sabab
(Ahmer; October 20, 2007)
Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..
Regards,
Re: Teray Sabab..
Achi Hai Yaar Simple Likhna Mujhe Achay Lagta Hai
SJ
October 22, 2007, 7:04am
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Re: Teray Sabab..
Aik Nazm,
Meri Jaan Meray Ye Roz-o-Shab
Hain Teray Sabab
Meray Dil Main Jitna Bhi Pyar Hai
Ye Jo Chahaton Ki Phu’aar Hai
Hai Teray Leay
Meri Jaan Magar
Meri Shakh’siat Ka Nikhaar Aur
Meray Dil Ka Saara Sukoon, Sab
Hai Teray Sabab
(Ahmer; October 20, 2007)
Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..
Regards,
ahaaaaaaaaa…
kya baat hai…
sweet n cutee…
kis k saabab hai ye sab???
mujhay tou bata dou na…mein tou behan hon na…meray ilam mein tou honee chahiay na baat:)
superbly written…
mein “un” ko sunaon ge…
SJ
October 22, 2007, 7:05am
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Re: Teray Sabab..
meray say pehlay aj Sid nay reply day diya:crying:
Re: Teray Sabab..
thnx alot sonia.. hmm.. SiD jee ne aaj pehle reply ker dia.. magar its never too late na..
Ali_2
October 22, 2007, 8:08am
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Re: Teray Sabab..
buhat khoob redidentity :k: tum to shair ho bhai
Re: Teray Sabab..
:(
acha chalo theek hai................:)
thats like a good girl.. :)
SJ
October 22, 2007, 8:33am
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Re: Teray Sabab..
thats like a good girl.. :)
aj kal app form mein ho........quite active......chalo achee baat hai....naya stuffmilay ga parhnay ko:)
Re: Teray Sabab..
aj kal app form mein ho........quite active......chalo achee baat hai....naya stuffmilay ga parhnay ko:)
pata hai kal aik aur nazm likhi thee wo bhi share karonga.. inshaAllah..
Allah karay aap ko pasand aye..
SJ
October 22, 2007, 8:36am
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Re: Teray Sabab..
Awww…Bro u r wonderful poet…mujhay bhala kyun pasand nahin aay ge:hugz:
waiting for ur poem:)