Teray Paas Aanay Ko Jee Chahta Hai..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity October 17, 2007, 9:52am 1

Aik Purani Si Ghazal,

Teray Paas Aanay Ko Jee Chahta Hai
Tera Dil Churany Ko Jee Chahta Hai

Tujhe Kitni Shiddat Se Main Chahta Hoon
Tujhe Ye Batanay Ko Jee Chahta Hai

Teray Pyar Ke Iss Haseen Da’iray Main
Ye Jeewan Bitanay Ko Jee Chahta Hai

Tujhe Jab Kabhi Main Ager Sochta Hoon
Mera Muskuranay Ko Jee Chahta Hai

(Ahmer)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

deadsoul October 17, 2007, 9:58am 2

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nice one

redidentity October 17, 2007, 10:17am 3

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thnx alot deadsoul :)

SJ October 17, 2007, 10:23am 4

Re: Teray Paas Aanay Ko Jee Chahta Hai..

Hain…
choori karna achee baat nahin hai Bro…:nono:
wel overall nice ghazal:)

redidentity October 17, 2007, 10:38am 5

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:s

sonia.. mainay chori nahi ki.. sachi.. haan magar.. “Jee Chahta Hai” ki zameen buhat si ghzal main use hui hai

aminas October 17, 2007, 10:39am 6

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Its reminding me of a tune, but well done :k:

redidentity October 17, 2007, 10:42am 7

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thnx aminas..

arsalanh2000 October 17, 2007, 11:08am 8

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Hmmmm, Waqi Ahmer Bhai .... I am not confirm about but doubtfull

Sonia is little bit rigth
anyhow, there is no doubt it is good one

redidentity October 17, 2007, 11:20am 9

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yar.. i dont know.. but i think k we can always use the Radeef or ghazal ki zameen..

still.. :)

fizatiq October 17, 2007, 1:23pm 10

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beautiful ...kya baat hai.........

Light poetry...

SJ October 17, 2007, 1:32pm 11

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Ahmer…mein nay ye nahin kaha k app nay ghazal chori ki hai:smack:
Teray Paas Aanay Ko Jee Chahta Hai
Tera Dil Churany Ko Jee Chahta Hai
mein nay tou shair ki wajah say kaha tha…
app nay ye soocha bhi kaisay…
mujhay pata hai app bohat zabardust likhnay walay ho:hugz:
ye ghazal chori wala kaam appka nahin!!
hopefully ab app ko baat samajh aa gaee ho ge:)

SJ October 17, 2007, 1:34pm 12

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Why u guys r taking me wrong:smack:
mein nay kisi aursense mein kaha tha

SheerMal

SheerMal

_Masoom_Muskaan October 17, 2007, 1:58pm 13

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sense of humor boht kharb he

SJ October 17, 2007, 1:59pm 14

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tum chup karo................

Timepaas

Azad October 18, 2007, 3:14am 15

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hummm jee chahta hay

redidentity October 19, 2007, 5:22am 16

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sonia..

pata hai mujhe bilkul nahi maloom k ye sher kisi aur shair ne bhi bilkul aise use kia tha.. thnx alot k aap ne pointout kia.. may be meray la’shaoor main ye sher mojuud ho.. aur mujhe pata bhi na chala ho..

can U please gimme that ghazal jis ka ye sher hai.. pleasee…

Shab-e-Hijar October 19, 2007, 5:45am 17

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awww sweet ghazal :)

Timepaas

redidentity October 19, 2007, 5:48am 18

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thnx SHab Jee.. :)