Koyal
April 23, 2008, 3:09am
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udaas raatien khizaa’N hUm safar safar gUm’naam
teray khyaal k mOsam hUmien tO maar ga’ey
na Jaa’N bharaktii hAi apni na raakh hOtey hAiN
hUmien ye kaisi mUseebat maiN tUm utaar ga’ey
ajeeb dUshman e jAan tha K bin larey jeeta
ajeeb jUng thi hUm Jis meiN haar haar ga’ey
bOhet hii thOri sii mOhlat mili mOhabbat kii
hUm apna aap magar jaatey jaatey waar ga’ey
kisi K bhaijey hOye aAa ga’ey thy dUnya meiN
kisi sey maangi hOii zindgii gUzaar ga’ey
na chand atka kisi Jaga na aadli’yaan atkien
hUm us kii raat k aa’ngaN meiN baar baar ga’ey
Re: teray khyaal k mOsam hUmien tO maar ga’eye
OUtstanding sharing birdyy jee
Re: teray khyaal k mOsam hUmien tO maar ga’eye
ajeeb dUshman e jAan tha K bin larey jeeta
ajeeb jUng thi hUm Jis meiN haar haar ga’ey
Nice :k:
Koyal
April 23, 2008, 11:30am
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thanku lonley
Koyal
April 23, 2008, 11:31am
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hay shabo ap ki ankhaiN hamin maar maar ga’eiN
Re: teray khyaal k mOsam hUmien tO maar ga'eye
beautiful.. buhat khoob..
Re: teray khyaal k mOsam hUmien tO maar ga'eye
Buhat Aalaa :~)
Aryaan
April 24, 2008, 4:29pm
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Re: teray khyaal k mOsam hUmien tO maar ga’eye
Great poetry Koyal ..:k:
Re: teray khyaal k mOsam hUmien tO maar ga’eye
very nice :k:
Koyal
April 25, 2008, 3:23am
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thanks BY
Koyal
April 25, 2008, 3:24am
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thanks Aryan
Re: teray khyaal k mOsam hUmien tO maar ga’eye
Veryyy Nice Koyal…
S.786
April 25, 2008, 5:20pm
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good
Re: teray khyaal k mOsam hUmien tO maar ga'eye
ajeeb dUshman e jAan tha K bin larey jeeta
ajeeb jUng thi hUm Jis meiN haar haar ga'ey
Bohat aala ........ :)
muddii
April 26, 2008, 10:24am
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Re: teray khyaal k mOsam hUmien tO maar ga'eye
udaas raatien khizaa'N hUm safar safar gUm'naam
teray khyaal k mOsam hUmien tO maar ga'ey
na Jaa'N bharaktii hAi apni na raakh hOtey hAiN
hUmien ye kaisi mUseebat maiN tUm utaar ga'ey
ajeeb dUshman e jAan tha K bin larey jeeta
ajeeb jUng thi hUm Jis meiN haar haar ga'ey
bOhet hii thOri sii mOhlat mili mOhabbat kii
hUm apna aap magar jaatey jaatey waar ga'ey
kisi K bhaijey hOye aAa ga'ey thy dUnya meiN
kisi sey maangi hOii zindgii gUzaar ga'ey
na chand atka kisi Jaga na aadli'yaan atkien
hUm us kii raat k aa'ngaN meiN baar baar ga'ey
fantastic fantastic choice Koyal.................matchless post:)
Re: teray khyaal k mOsam hUmien tO maar ga'eye
bahut umdah...........................................
Koyal
April 28, 2008, 3:19am
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Re: teray khyaal k mOsam hUmien tO maar ga'eye
fantastic fantastic choice Koyal.................matchless post:)
thanks muddi g :)
Koyal
April 28, 2008, 3:20am
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bahut umdah...........................................
shukria doll :)
Daanie
April 29, 2008, 5:56am
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wonderful :)
Koyal
April 30, 2008, 4:00am
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Re: teray khyaal k mOsam hUmien tO maar ga'eye
ajeeb dUshman e jAan tha K bin larey jeeta
ajeeb jUng thi hUm Jis meiN haar haar ga'ey
Bohat aala ........ :)
thanks for comin in ma thread :)