teray khyaal k mOsam hUmien tO maar ga'eye

Koyal · April 23, 2008, 3:09am

udaas raatien khizaa’N hUm safar safar gUm’naam
teray khyaal k mOsam hUmien tO maar ga’ey

na Jaa’N bharaktii hAi apni na raakh hOtey hAiN
hUmien ye kaisi mUseebat maiN tUm utaar ga’ey

ajeeb dUshman e jAan tha K bin larey jeeta
ajeeb jUng thi hUm Jis meiN haar haar ga’ey

bOhet hii thOri sii mOhlat mili mOhabbat kii
hUm apna aap magar jaatey jaatey waar ga’ey

kisi K bhaijey hOye aAa ga’ey thy dUnya meiN
kisi sey maangi hOii zindgii gUzaar ga’ey

na chand atka kisi Jaga na aadli’yaan atkien
hUm us kii raat k aa’ngaN meiN baar baar ga’ey

being_lonely · April 23, 2008, 3:10am

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OUtstanding sharing birdyy jee

Shab-e-Hijar · April 23, 2008, 4:06am

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ajeeb dUshman e jAan tha K bin larey jeeta
ajeeb jUng thi hUm Jis meiN haar haar ga’ey

Nice :k:

Koyal · April 23, 2008, 11:30am

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thanku lonley

Koyal · April 23, 2008, 11:31am

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hay shabo ap ki ankhaiN hamin maar maar ga’eiN

redidentity · April 24, 2008, 6:10am

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beautiful.. buhat khoob..

Precious_Khan · April 24, 2008, 9:04am

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Buhat Aalaa :~)

Aryaan · April 24, 2008, 4:29pm

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Great poetry Koyal..:k:

bheegiyaad · April 24, 2008, 4:31pm

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very nice :k:

Koyal · April 25, 2008, 3:23am

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thanks BY

Koyal · April 25, 2008, 3:24am

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thanks Aryan

Shumaisa · April 25, 2008, 6:20am

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Veryyy Nice Koyal…

S.786 · April 25, 2008, 5:20pm

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good

kaleemhk · April 26, 2008, 8:25am

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ajeeb dUshman e jAan tha K bin larey jeeta
ajeeb jUng thi hUm Jis meiN haar haar ga'ey

Bohat aala ........ :)

muddii · April 26, 2008, 10:24am

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fantastic fantastic choice Koyal.................matchless post:)

innocent_doll22 · April 26, 2008, 12:00pm

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bahut umdah...........................................

Koyal · April 28, 2008, 3:19am

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thanks muddi g :)

Koyal · April 28, 2008, 3:20am

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shukria doll :)

Daanie · April 29, 2008, 5:56am

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wonderful :)

Koyal · April 30, 2008, 4:00am

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thanks for comin in ma thread :)