Re: ~Tera Zarori Hai Paar Jana~
Perhaps you missed something in line number 5 
Very touch:k: Nice stuff Samavia
A little suggestion if you don’t mind. Whatever you use to address the main character of your ghazal/nazm or call yourself with, always stick to it. Suppose you use “tum” to address him, don’t call her “tu”. And if you use “hameiN,” don’t use “mujhey” for yourself. It looks very odd and doesn’t go well with the readers. Happy writing