tera naam hi aaya tha lab par ke saari khalqat cheekh utthi

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal June 20, 2007, 1:18pm 1

***tera naam hi aaya tha lab par ke saari khalqat cheekh utthi
tera haath pakar kar sarkoN par terey saath chaley to kya ho ga!

yahaN har koi mujh sey kehta hey tujhey hargiz bhi na sochooN meiN
par phir bhi meri aaNkhoN meiN tera khaab paley to kya ho ga!

terey saamney be’khud ho jaooN yehi soch ke meiN to darta hooN
koi aesa lamha paagal sa aa kar na taley to kya ho ga!

meiN aksar sochney lagta hooN aakhaast ki neeli basti meiN
tera taara merey taarey sey agar aan miley to kya ho ga!

deadsoul June 20, 2007, 1:28pm 2

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**terey saamney be'khud ho jaooN yehi soch ke meiN to darta hooN
koi aesa lamha paagal sa aa kar na taley to kya ho ga! **

wah buhat khob

Amal June 20, 2007, 2:12pm 3

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Aek aadh kaam ki cheez nikal hi aati hey :~)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh June 20, 2007, 3:45pm 4

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jo bhi hoga manzoor-e-Khuda hoga:~)

SJ June 20, 2007, 4:17pm 5

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Beautiful Ghazal!!!
:)

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system June 20, 2007, 4:20pm 6

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very beautifull

Aaj Kiss Baat Par Gussa Aaya ??????

Jhanjharewali June 21, 2007, 1:03am 7

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**meiN aksar sochney lagta hooN aakhaast ki neeli basti meiN
tera taara merey taarey sey agar aan miley to kya ho ga! **

kaash!! **
**bahot khuub koyalji

Koyal June 21, 2007, 2:49am 8

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thanks

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Koyal June 21, 2007, 2:50am 9

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umeed pe duni'aa qaim hia JW umeed ka daman na choriey :p
thanks

Koyal June 21, 2007, 2:52am 10

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thanks cute'i

Koyal June 21, 2007, 2:55am 11

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deep_ocean June 21, 2007, 5:07am 12

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nice

decent_Felow June 21, 2007, 5:19am 13

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wonderful

tahreem_saeed June 21, 2007, 5:27am 14

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excellent per aisa duniya honey nahi dey gee kash he theek hai

Koyal June 21, 2007, 12:45pm 15

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Koyal June 21, 2007, 12:46pm 16

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Shukria

Koyal June 21, 2007, 12:47pm 17

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:)

NikamiJano June 23, 2007, 2:44am 18

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:)

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AQ June 24, 2007, 6:27am 19

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:)

WiseGuy June 24, 2007, 10:19am 20

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insaan himmat tu karay jo bhi hoga dekha jaye ga