tenu dekhi javan...ya mar javan...

FAsanti · June 3, 2009, 7:19pm

**Main tenu dekhan, **
tey dekhi javan…
naa dekhan tay…
mar javan.:hinna:
aa tenu nainan day vich band karlan,
tey dharkan vich vasawan.
jay dard haseeb da vass chale…
teri aayi, mai mar javan

Shab-e-Hijar · June 3, 2009, 7:37pm

its lovely :)

sanadubai · June 3, 2009, 7:58pm

Re: tenu dekhi javan...ya mar javan...

nice punjabii poetry

FAsanti · June 3, 2009, 10:26pm

Re: tenu dekhi javan...ya mar javan...

thanks so much :)
glad u like it!

Heiress1 · June 4, 2009, 6:06pm

Re: tenu dekhi javan...ya mar javan...

verrrryyy nice..

FAsanti · June 4, 2009, 7:51pm

Re: tenu dekhi javan...ya mar javan...

thanks dear :)

Precious_Khan · June 4, 2009, 8:12pm

Really …

Khoobsoorat Sharing :~)

FAsanti · June 4, 2009, 8:14pm

Re: tenu dekhi javan...ya mar javan...

aww thankoo :)
such a compliment coming from
a great poet like u Precious K...

Precious_Khan · June 4, 2009, 8:27pm

FAsanti · June 4, 2009, 8:41pm

Re: tenu dekhi javan...ya mar javan...

thanks ko Bismillaah karlo jee ;)

Precious_Khan · June 4, 2009, 10:17pm

WHy Jee ???

Aryaan · June 4, 2009, 10:56pm

Re: tenu dekhi javan...ya mar javan...

Bohat khoob FAsanti...

muncho · June 5, 2009, 1:54pm

Re: tenu dekhi javan...ya mar javan...

ye hur sorut marna hee kiyun maqarar hua?

redidentity · June 5, 2009, 2:10pm

Re: tenu dekhi javan…ya mar javan…

tuadi v ki gal ay Fasanti jee..

tusi aa gaye o te chha gaye o thha ker ke..

FAsanti · June 5, 2009, 5:27pm

Re: tenu dekhi javan…ya mar javan…

thanks Aryaan.
and nice avatar u got! :k:

FAsanti · June 5, 2009, 5:28pm

Re: tenu dekhi javan…ya mar javan…

Precious K: coz thanks aap sai miltee hai jo wo hazm nahin hotee
me see u nai Bismillaah kar he lee thanks!
as ur post is edited lolz

FAsanti · June 5, 2009, 5:28pm

Re: tenu dekhi javan...ya mar javan...

muncho wot do u mean?

FAsanti · June 5, 2009, 5:29pm

Re: tenu dekhi javan...ya mar javan...

Reddy jee :)
thankyou jee!
phull barre soren nay ;)
tha kay tussi phul ditte!
barra chunga lagea menu :D

redidentity · June 5, 2009, 6:02pm

Re: tenu dekhi javan...ya mar javan...

:)

FAsanti · June 5, 2009, 6:31pm

Re: tenu dekhi javan...ya mar javan...

kinne chunge lagde wo smile karde o tay
Dua way Allah assi sab hameshan yun hasde raweeyay
InshaAllah tay Amin keh kay :)