Re: Technical issues of writing
Nice to know that there are a few takers around :) Nickless, why don't you ask specific questions so that they could be answered to-the-point.
By the way there is a guide already posted on sever forums about how to compose balanced poetry. I am posting that widely-circulated guide here but will post my comments on this guide later:
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*Sabaq #1.
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Aisi Salim mucamman bahraiN jo aik rukn ko mukarrar laane se banti heiN, wo 7 heiN jin meiN se aik tark kardi gaiee hai jiska naam Bahr-e-Wafir hai.
Bahr ka naam.................. Rukn ka vazn..........4 bar 1 misreA mein
1) Bahr-e-Rajaz……………..Mus’taf’I’lun…………..””””””””””””””””
2) Bahr-e-hazaj……………..Mafaa’ee’lun…………..”””””””””””””””””
3) Bahr-e-kaamil……………Mu’ta’faa’I’lun………… “””””””””””””””””
4) Bahr-e-Ramal……………Faa’I’laa’tun……………. “””””””””””””””””
5) Bahr-e-Mutaqaarib….. Fa’oo’lun……………….. “”””””””””””””””””
6) Bahr-e-Mutadaarik…… Faa’I’lun………………… “”””””””””””””””””
Aik rukn agar aik sheAr meiN 8 martaba (yani 4 martabah aik misreA meiN) aaye tou us BeHr ko mucamman kahte haiN.
Aik hi rukn baghair kisi aur rukn ke izafeh ke aaye tou us BeHr ko Salim kehte heiN.
Mandarja-e-zail panch (5) beHreN do (2) rukn ke mukarrar laane se banti heiN:
1) BeHr-e-khafeef = faa'ilaa'tun mus'taf'ilun faa'ilun
2) BeHr-e-sareeA = mustaf'ilun mustaf'ilun maf'Aoolaat Mazkoora-e-baalaa dounoUn beHreN sir musaddas shakl meiN isteAmaal houti heiN.
3) BeHr-e-Mujtac = mustaf'ilun faa'ilaa'tun mustaf'ilun faa'ilaatun
4) BeHr-e-MuzaariA=mafaa'eelun faa'ilaatun mafaa'eelun faa'ilaatun
5) BeHr-e-MunsariH=mustaf'ilun faa'ilaat mustaf'ilun faa'ilaat Yeh beHraiN Saalim mustaAmal nahiN heiN. Jis mein agar aik sheAr meiN che (6) rukn houN tou us ko musaddar aur aaTh (8) rukn houN tou usko mucamman kehte heiN.
Note: In arkaan ke saheeh talaffuz ke liye main aik Jpeg file bhi bhaij rahaa hooN jisko apne paas mehfooz karleejiye. Roman meiN aur Urdu meiN arkaan ki muTaabiqat ko achchi tarah se samajhne ki koushish keejiye.
Ham doosre sabaq meiN mandarja-e-baalaa arkaan ko samjhne ki koushish karenge. ShurooA karenge faa’I’lun se. Isko yooN kahaa jaasakta hai faa + ilun. (faa ke vazn per aane waale alfaz heiN macalan (aa, jaa, laa, khaa, Dhaa, paa, gaa, thaa, chaa, din, tum, ham, kab, sab, too, bhi, Dhal, kal, per, ) waghairah.
(ilun ke vazn per aane waale alfaaz heiN macalan (gaya, sunaa, chalaa, khulaa, karou, sunou, nahiN, abhee, kaTee, ajab, ghazab, Talab, Tarab, sifat, sanam, qadam) waghairah.
Is tarah se faa’ilun ke mumaacil alfaaz houNge macalan (aa’gaya, keh’diya, jaa’chukaa, Dhal’gaya, reh’gaiee, chou’Riye, ab’nahiN, sil’sila) waghairah.
Ummeed hai ke aap faa’ilun ka vazn samajh gaye hounge.
Ab aane waali JPEG file ko bhi paRhiye aur doosre sabaq ka intizaar farmaayiye.
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*Sabaq #2.
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Ham ne jin 7 behraoN ke bare mein aik taAarufi zikr kiya hai unka tafseeli zikr b’ad meiN aayega. Filwaqt, hamare paas ahmiyyat un arkan ki hei jinka zikr kiy’ya gaya hai.
Wo arkan heiN: mus’taf’I’lun, ma’faa’ee’lun, muta’faa’I’lun, faa’I’laa’tun, fa’oo’lun, faa’I’lun.
Faa’I’lun ke 2 hissaoN ka zikr kiyaa gayaa.1)faa 2)ilun
Yani faa’I’lun = faa + ilun. (is silsileh meiN chand alfaaz ki micalaiN paish ki gaieeN jo bahut ahem heiN laikin unki taraf ham ba’d meiN tafseeli baat cheet karenge. Aaj faa’I’lun ki bunyaad per ham doosre arkan ke vazn ko bhi samajhne ki koushish karenge.
Faa’I’lun = faa + ilun
Ab fa’oo’lun per ghaur keejiye. Fa’oo’lun = fa’oo + lun aur yeh hai (lun + fa’oo) ka ultaa. lun = faa aur fa’oo = ilun. Is tarah se fa’oo + lun ulTaa hai faa + ilon ka.
MicalaiN:
faa + ilun = jal’gayaa, miT,gayaa, chup’gayaa, tum’kahou
Fa’oo + lun = gayaa’jal, gayaa’mit, gayaa’chup, kahou’tum
Is tarah se ham ne mukhtasar taur per faa’ilun aur fa’oolun ko samajhne ki koushish ki.
Ab faa’I’laa’tun per ghaur karte heiN.
Faa + ilaa + tun (is meiN faa se ham waaqif houchuke heiN.)
Ilaa = ilon (is se bhi waaqif houchuke heiN.)
Lun = faa (is se bhi waaqif houchuke heiN) yani faa’I’laa’tun ka vazn waisa hi hai jaisa faa + ilun + faa ka yani is ki micalaiN
yooN housakti heiN.
Faa + ilaa + tun = hou gaya thaa, kiya kahou ge, sun rahe hou, gham nahiN hai, Phir hamaiN kiyaa, zin dagee meiN, aa rahaa hooN, thak gaye heiN, (waghairah)
YahaN tak ham ne 3 arkan ko samajhne ki koushish ki hai:
1) faa’I’lun
2) fa’oo’lun
3) faa’I’laa’tun.
In ke mumaacil alfaaz ka bhi zikr kiyaa gayaa hai. Ab seekhne waalaoN ke liye zaroori hei ke wo in teenoN arkaan ke mumacil alfaaz banane ki koushish karaiN aur apni koushish mujhe PM yaa Email se bhaijaiN taakeh agar koiee ghalaTi hou to door karsakooN aur jawaab dooN.
Ab aur teen ahem arkan baaqi heiN:
Muta’faa’I’lun, mafaa’ee’lun aur mus’taf’I’lun jinke bare mein ham Sabaq No.3 meiN guftagu karenge.
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