tayree Khushboo naheen miltee

Man_de_Mouj · February 23, 2003, 5:41pm

GHAZAL

Tayree khushboo naheen miltee tayra lehja naheen milta
hamain tou shehar main koe tayray jaysa naheen milta

yeh kaysee dhund main ham tum safar aghaaz kar baythay
tumhain aankhain naheen milteen hamain chehra naheen milta

har ek tadbeer apni ra-aygaan thehree mohabbat main
kisi bhi khawb ko taabeer ka rasta naheen milta

bhala os kay dukhoun ki raat ka koe madawa hay
woh maan jis ko kabhi khouya hoa baccha naheen milta

zamanay ko qareenay say woh apnay saath rakhta hay
magar mayray leyay ous ko koe lamha naheen milta

Azad · February 23, 2003, 5:49pm

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Wah :k: :k:

arssa e daraz kay baad koi achi cheez parrhnay ko mili

thanks for sharing

Man_de_Mouj · February 23, 2003, 5:54pm

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Thanks a lot Azad… I am indeed elevated. Despite my heartily desires, I just cannot contribute such selections as much as I want. I however try to…Thanks again…

_Nazish · February 23, 2003, 6:26pm

Zabardast :k:

Excellent choice.

I have read this one many times before, alwayz liked it.
Thanks for posting

who is poet, btw?

Man_de_Mouj · February 23, 2003, 6:38pm

who is poet, btw?
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The Poet is Noshi Gillani from her book " Mohabatain jab shumaar karna"..thanks for liking.....

_Suraj · February 23, 2003, 7:07pm

wah ji wah NG the great :k:
Thanks for sharing with us

weteyes82 · February 24, 2003, 12:16am

*Tayree khushboo naheen miltee tayra lehja naheen milta
hamain tou shehar main koe tayray jaysa naheen milta *

wo kya shair hai k: koi uss saa ho to naam bhii us saa rakhe!
i dont remember the sher now..If any1of u remember it..plz do share!

*yeh kaysee dhund main ham tum safar aghaaz kar baythay
tumhain aankhain naheen milteen hamain chehra naheen milta *

aahammm..ab ye dhund kaa naajaiz istamaal na kerna bhai..zra khayaal se;)

*bhala os kay dukhoun ki raat ka koe madawa hay
woh maan jis ko kabhi khouya hoa baccha naheen milta *

wah! beautiful....really nice...buhat hii khobsurat sher hai...
kuch sher aisee hote hain..k jin ko parh k aap kuch dair to kuch nahin keh saktee..stunningly beautiful and true.

ullujii · February 24, 2003, 7:23pm

**Tayree khushboo naheen miltee tayra lehja naheen milta
hamain tou shehar main koe tayray jaysa naheen milta **

wah keya bat hai :k:

Capricorn · February 24, 2003, 8:08pm

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Wah :k:

Koyal · February 24, 2003, 8:10pm

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:k:

_Nazish · February 24, 2003, 8:37pm

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by weteyes82: *
**Tayree khushboo naheen miltee tayra lehja naheen milta
hamain tou shehar main koe tayray jaysa naheen milta *

wo kya shair hai k: koi uss saa ho to naam bhii us saa rakhe!
i dont remember the sher now..If any1of u remember it..plz do share!

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It think it's something like this.

Acha nahi laGta koi hamnaam tera
Koi tuj sa ho phir naam bhee tere jesa rakhey.

theek tara se yaad nahi, read it long time ago.

Philanthrope · February 24, 2003, 9:30pm

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Bohat Khoob:k:
Kia kehnay..
Thanks for sharing..

weteyes82 · February 24, 2003, 11:32pm

[QUOTE]
It think it's something like this.
Acha nahi laGta koi hamnaam tera
Koi tuj sa ho phir naam bhee tere jesa rakhey.
theek tara se yaad nahi, read it long time ago.
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well thnx Nazish:) haan kuch aise hii thaa shayad..kher kabhi phir nazar se guzr gaa to daikhein gee..
thnx again!
:)

aadhoorighazal · February 24, 2003, 11:36pm

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Tayree khushboo naheen miltee tayra lehja naheen milta
hamain tou shehar main koe tayray jaysa naheen milta

mauj ji !! keep trying ????shayed mil hi ja'ae.....