TasveereiN Bolti Hein — 6th Edition | Closed

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Azizaan-e-man :salam:

TasveereiN Bolti Hein (TBH) ka 6th Edition haazir-e-khidmat hey. Jese ke aap ke ilm meiN hey ke TBH ke 5th edition ke saath hum ney aek naya silsila shuru kia jis ke tehat ab tamaam posts review ki jaati heiN aur aek winner announce kia jaata hey. Isi rule ke tehat winner hi nai tasveer muntakhib karta hey aur wo hi agley muqaabley ke leeye judge ke faraiz anjaam deta hey.

TBH ke 5th Edition ki winner rahieN Masoom Muskaan. TBH ke 6th Edition ki tasveer unhi ki taraf sey mohaiya ki gai hey aur wo hi is edition ke leeye judge bhi hoN gi.**[note]Members sey guzaarish hey ke mukammal nazm ya ghazal post karney sey gureiz kareiN aur tasveer ke mutaabiq aek sheir, qat’aa ya alag alag aashaar ya qat’aat, alag, alag post kareiN ta ke parrhney, dikhney aur judge karney meiN aasaani rahey. [/note]
**TBH 6th Edition ke leeye tasveer:

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[note] Apni posts meiN ye tasveer quote karne ke leeye neechey dia gaya link istimaal kijeeye.

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Zikar Uska meri Kahani main

Chand ka aks jaise pani main

Wo to khamosh hi rahe or hum

Jane kya keh gaye rawani main

Apni ankhian gawai hain hum ne

Apne khuwabon ki pasbani main

Itni muddat ka sath choot gaya

Ik chhoti si badgumani main

Zikar Uska meri Kahani main

Chand ka aks Jaise Pani main

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Hamare saamnay falak per taaroon ke jhurmat mein akela chaand hota thaa ...

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Main ne ye note bad main parha :(
Sorry judge sahiba :(

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**Nayi naveli tanhaai ki baaheiN daal ke baahoN meiN raat gaye tak neher kinare beitthey rehna seekh liya **

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gumsum si rehguzar thi , kinaara naddi ka tha
pani mein chand, chand mein chehra kisi ka tha

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deepak jugnu chand sitare aik se hain

yani saray iishq ke maray aik se hain

hijar ki shab me daikh to aa ke mere chand

mere aansu aur ye taray aik se hain !!!

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Uljhi Hoi Firaaq Ki Raaton K Darmiyaan
Tanha Hai Meri Zaat Mujhe Chaand Chahiye

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kia zarori hai hathon main tera hath bhi ho
chand yaadon ki rafaqat hi boht kafi hai…

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gehri gehri zaat samandar
din sehra aur raat samandar
main hon phir bhi tishna tishna
warna us ki zaat samandar…

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har koi dil ki hatheli pe hai sehra rakhay
kis ko seraab karay wo kis ko payasa rakhay
umar bhar koan nibhata hai taluq itna
aay meri jaan ke dushman tujhay Allah rakhay

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pura dukh aur aadha chand
hijr ki shab aur aesa chand

raat kay shaanay per sar rakhay
daikh raha hai sapna chand
sookhay patton kay jhurmat per
shabnam thi ya nunha chand
haath hila ker rukhsat hoga
oos ki soorat hijr ka chand
sehra sehra bhatak raha hai
apnay ishq main sacha chand
raat kay shayad aik bajay hain
soota hoga mera chand…

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aik se musaafiR haiN
aik sa muqadar hai
maiN zameeN peR tanha
auR wo aas’maaNo pe

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phiR teRi yaad meiN ghaltaan rehay shab bhaR jagay
jis taRha chand kay humRah samandeR jagay

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bikhRay bikhRay se rahtey haiN sahil chand hawa aur maiN
rait pe kia likhtey rahtey sahil chaanc hawa auR maiN
gul khushbo se dil umeed seankhaiN neend se khali haiN
baRsooN bethey jaagh rahya haiN sahil chaand hawa auR maiN

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Raat, Samandar, Chaand, Hawa Aur Tanha Main
Khwaab, Azaab Ki Ye Dunya Aur Tanha Main
Janey Kab Se Gum-Sum Yun Hi Betha Hoon
Bheegi Shaam, Tera Rasta Aur Tanha Main
Kaash ko Tu Bhi Mera Hum-raz Baney
Mujh Se Saare Log Khafa Aur Tanha Main
Chaand Bhi Aakhir Mera Aangan Chorh Gaya
Raat Ka Pichla Peher Dhala Aur Tanha Main …

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wo chaand ki roshni main youn udaas baithi thi
goya har lamhe main apni tanhai dhoondh rahi thi

ps. yeh meri pehli koshish hai…pehli daffa koi shair likhne ki koshish ki hai.

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                              .JHILMIL KARTA NEELA PANI.JAGMAG KARTAR CHAND ORR TARAY    


                               .RAAT KI RANI,TARAY,KIRNAY.CHANDA,PUNAM TARAY NAAM
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Re: TasveereiN Bolti Hein — 6 Edition

Not bad at all for a first-timer :lajawab: … I am impressed :slight_smile:

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Lovely contributions all … :k: