Tashreeh karain---Ahmed Faraz Shair

cutenice62 · June 21, 2013, 10:51am

Tu yahien haar gaya tha meray buzdil dushman
Mujh saaay tanha k muqabil tera lashkar nikla…

Let see how many distinct explanation can we see.

LP · June 21, 2013, 10:56am

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Dushman pehle he haar gya tha cuz aik k muqable usne lashkar bheja.Aur isiliye wo dushman buzdil bhi hai.

Nain · June 21, 2013, 11:33am

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matalb ke us ke dushman ka lasker bhi buzdil hai wo akela hi kafi hai sab ke liye :p

cutenice62 · June 21, 2013, 11:52am

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yeh tu 5th pass bacha bhi bata sakta hai....aap sab poetry forum k members say may ziada expect kar raha hoon....

LP can u do after my yesterday's lecture? and points i mentioned.

muqawwee123 · June 21, 2013, 11:55am

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Jang main tadaad nain iste’daad dekhi jati hai :cobra:

cutenice62 · June 21, 2013, 11:59am

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koi or point of view???

yeh sahee ghalat ki baat nahi hai … bal k is liyay hai k kitnay different point of view samnay atay hain…abhi tak sirf aik

muqawwee123 · June 21, 2013, 12:04pm

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bechari bahoo per saas ne apni betiyon ke sath hamla kia.... shayara rote huwe apne miyan se (mayke jake phone per) shikayat kar rahi hai:

Tu ne dil mera toda, kahin ka na choRa
Sanam bewafa, Sanam bewafa,

PS: Its just an alternate explanation :p

cutenice62 · June 21, 2013, 12:13pm

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phir aap loag moderators note likh detay hain serious discussion ki jayee.....
any serious explanation?

muqawwee123 · June 21, 2013, 12:19pm

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post no. 2, 3, 5 main serious explanation thi.. aap ne doosre rukh se dekhne ko kaha, hum ne sir e tasleem kham kia.. baqi bhi agar kuch zehn main aaya to zaroor pesh karenge aap ki khidmat main

cutenice62 · June 21, 2013, 12:22pm

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apnay aap ko shair ki jaga pay rakh k sochoo na baeee

muqawwee123 · June 21, 2013, 12:23pm

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toba karen.. shayar iss waqt abdi neend ke maze le raha hai aur hum ne abhi dekha hi kia hai

Nain · June 21, 2013, 12:31pm

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main shayer tu nahi

muqawwee123 · June 21, 2013, 12:42pm

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shayar kehta hai chiyonti ko marne ke liye hathiyon ka lashkar nahin bhejna chahiye mehngai ke iss daur main

cutenice62 · June 21, 2013, 12:47pm

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very well done.

muqawwee123 · June 21, 2013, 12:48pm

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zarra nawazi aur himmat afzai ka shukriya

Nain · June 21, 2013, 12:54pm

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ye app ki hi himmat hai

LP · June 21, 2013, 1:02pm

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cutenice Mujhe wo he samajh aya lines parhne k baad...ab aap apni point of view bataiye.