tasalee?

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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tum seye jeb kutch kho diya tum neye,
tow keiseye dhondho ho tum ubb?
tumhein kutch mel giya jeb,
tow keiseye semeito geye tum iseye keb?
itnee saaree kho deen jeb cheezein tum neye,
itna seb phir seye mila heye tum ko,
tow kis ko bhoola ker, tum kiseye yaad ayey keiseye?
…
wafa ka herf aisa, iseye nazr kee hed keisee?
tumhein unjaan guzrey lemheye kafee…
dekho, tumhara chara-ger keisa?
naee naee batein, dilaseye, aur seb bahaneye,
tum ko mubaraak, tumhareye;
anokheye bhiyanek, seb tajroobeye tumhareye!!!
bohet naraaz sheb o roz meye ubb
tumhareye bedl ka bedl keisa?
ulfet kee kemee keisee?
nafs ka alem keisa?

…
dekho, tasalee tumharee
meireye pas nahi
kyoonkeye tum meireye sath nahi
kyoonkeye tum meireye sath nahi

Dushwari

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Re: tasalee?

*aap ko suwaal karnay ki beemari hai? aap ki poetry mai bi har doosra jumla ? mai end hota hai.

bohat hi hairaan-kun shuda orat hain aap? aisa konsa zindagi mai hadsa hoa hai kay aap har waqt ? aur? ? ? ? ?????
*

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Re: tasalee?

arn,

thanks for your concern. i appreciate your effort.
poetry is poetry. you cant presume that the narrator means one thing that you are thinking or presuming.

however, you can evolve a meaning on your own, that may be better to understand, without being biased and opinionated.

best,

Dushwari

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Re: tasalee?

*arn ho ga aap ka hone wala,

naam sahi tara lia karo.

and I was just joking, no need to get all emotional.*

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you have no manners, arn. that is your problem.

best,

Dushwari

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^ ghar damaad bana lo, sab seekh jayoonga.

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the last part is so fine :) keep it up dush

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thanks shab-e-hijar.

best,

Dushwari

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Re: tasalee?

Ap punjabi men bhee likhtee hain na? Kitnee samagh atii hey ap ko hamarii zuban