Tark e Taluqaat pe Roya na tu na mian

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Tark e Taluqaat pe Roya na tu na mian
Lekin ye kia ke chain se soya na tu na main

Halaat ke talism ne pathra dia magar
Beete samay ki yaad main khoya na tu na main

Her chand ke ikhtilaaf ke pehlu hazar the
Waa kar saka magar lab e goya na tu na main

Nohay Faseel e zabt se unchay na ho sake
Khul kar dayar e sang main roya na tu na main

Jab bhi nazar uthti to falak ki taraf uthti
Bargushta aasman se goya na tu na main

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Re: Tark e Taluqaat pe Roya na tu na mian

very nice :k:

Her chand ke ikhtilaaf ke pehlu hazar the
Waa kar saka magar lab e goya na tu na main

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Humsafar?

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Re: Tark e Taluqaat pe Roya na tu na mian

Nahi...

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Nahi…
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First shair is same

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Re: Tark e Taluqaat pe Roya na tu na mian

Pehly iss baat ka jawab do... tum har member kay sath aik makhsos number naam kay agaye reply main kion likhti ho... aur tumnay hamesah unhi numbaron ko likhti ho... yeh kia baat?

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Me ny btaya to tha k me ye nahi likhti khudi aty hain mujhy to ye bhe nahi pta k number bhe makhsoos hota hy :bummer:
Apny ph me app dalain gupshup ki or post karen number khud ba khud add ho jaye ga.Ab theek hy jawab?

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Re: Tark e Taluqaat pe Roya na tu na mian

first lines.. Poet is same

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Who is the poet?

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Re: Tark e Taluqaat pe Roya na tu na mian

acha… warna main kai dino say yeh soch soch kar halkan hogiya tha kay itnay number kesay yaad kiye… ab theek hai…

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Re: Tark e Taluqaat pe Roya na tu na mian

Naseer Turabi.. who also wrote ‘Zindagi Khak na thi, khak uRate guzri’ for Zindagi Gulzar hai.. Recently, he came up with a book for teaching how to write poetry :hehe: