~~ Tanhaeyaan tumhara pata poochti raheen ~~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Amarbail December 31, 2010, 9:25pm 1

Dedicated to someone

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*Pathar bana diya mujhe rone nahe diya
Daaman bhi tere gham ne bhigone nahe diya

Tanhaeyaan tumhara pata poochti raheen
Shab bhar tumhari yaad ne sone nahe diya

Aankhoon mein aa ke beth gae ashkoon ki lehar
Palkoon pe koi khwaab pirone nahe diya

Dil ko tumhare naam ke aansoo azeez thay
Duniya ka koi dard samone nahe diya

‘Nasir’ yun us ki yaad chali haath thaam ke
Mailay mein is jahaan ke khone nahe diya …*

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Lamhay January 1, 2011, 9:45am 2

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lovely !

Amarbail January 1, 2011, 1:13pm 3

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Thanks Lamhay

Sheal January 1, 2011, 5:45pm 4

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very nice :k:

pktun January 2, 2011, 6:59am 5

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V v nyc
Thnx 4 sharing

Amarbail January 2, 2011, 9:51am 6

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Thank you Sheal and pktun ...

Amal January 3, 2011, 8:19pm 7

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[QUOTE]
Pathar bana diya mujhe rone nahe diya
Daaman bhi tere gham ne bhigone nahe diya

Tanhaeyaan tumhara pata poochti raheen
Shab bhar tumhari yaad ne sone nahe diya

Aankhoon mein aa ke beth gae ashkoon ki lehar
Palkoon pe koi khwaab pirone nahe diya
[/QUOTE]

Arif jo aashaar quote keeye heiN, bohat pasand aaey mujhey. Thanx for sharing it with us :)

waleedhbk January 3, 2011, 8:28pm 8

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Lovely :)

bheegiyaad January 4, 2011, 12:10am 9

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Aankhoon mein aa ke beth gae ashkoon ki lehar
Palkoon pe koi khwaab pirone nahe diya

nice

Amarbail January 4, 2011, 4:12am 10

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Bahut bahut shukriya sab dostoon ka ...

being_lonely January 4, 2011, 6:27pm 11

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Sad but nice AB :k:

Amarbail January 4, 2011, 6:34pm 12

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Thank you $id

Aryaan January 5, 2011, 3:48pm 13

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Very Nice** Arif**..:k:

LP January 15, 2011, 2:45pm 14

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:lajawab:

Shazia_Arif January 15, 2011, 4:49pm 15

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v nice but still confused that above are two poems na?

Southie January 15, 2011, 5:08pm 16

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Wow!