tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Ali_2 November 6, 2007, 5:32am 1

tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain
zara sii baat par dareena rishtay toot jatay hain

tumhien is baat par hairat k toota hai humara dil
muqabil jab-k hon pathar to sheeshay toot jatay hain

guzartay waqt say cheezien puranii ho hii jatii hain
dilon mein mail partii hai to jazbay toot jatay hain

hazaron khwaahishien tarteeb pati hain khyaalon mein
magar jab aankh khultii hai to sapnay toot jatay hain

umad aatay hain churiyon mein hazaron dukh zamanay kay
guzar kar umr kay hiisay say chehray toot jatay hain

na-janay kyon tumhari yaad aatii hai mujhay us dam
meray aangan mein jab bailon kay patay toot jatay hain

dukhon mein to nikal aatay hain aankhon say “zaheer” aansoo
khushi kay mousamon mein bhi kinaaray toot jatay hain

ghazal_kisi_ke November 6, 2007, 5:57am 2

Re: tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain

niceeeee !

Ali_2 November 6, 2007, 6:36am 3

Re: tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain

thnaks :)

Bushra November 6, 2007, 6:44am 4

Re: tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain

tumhien is baat par hairat k toota hai humara dil
muqabil jab-k hon pathar to sheeshay toot jatay hain

:k: Nice sharing:)

Shab-e-Hijar November 6, 2007, 7:15am 5

Re: tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain

bohat khoob :k:

tum_bin_1 November 6, 2007, 7:47am 6

Re: tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain

Very true

zabardast sharing :k:

NikamiJano November 6, 2007, 12:15pm 7

Re: tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain

hazaron khwaahishien tarteeb pati hain khyaalon mein
magar jab aankh khultii hai to sapnay toot jatay hain

umad aatay hain churiyon mein hazaron dukh zamanay kay
guzar kar umr kay hiisay say chehray toot jatay hain

v nice one of ma fav :)

Sheal November 6, 2007, 2:09pm 8

Re: tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain

hazaron khwaahishien tarteeb pati hain khyaalon mein
magar jab aankh khultii hai to sapnay toot jatay hain

bohot khoob :k:

aaj rone ko dil kr rha hai ...... :crying:

Ali_2 November 6, 2007, 2:13pm 9

Re: tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain

Thanks :)

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bheegiyaad November 6, 2007, 2:53pm 10

Re: tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain

very nice
:k:

bholibisri November 15, 2007, 2:02am 11

Re: tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain

wohi tu

Ali_2 November 16, 2007, 5:22am 12

Re: tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain

:)

Shab-e-Hijar November 16, 2007, 5:42am 13

Re: tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain

thanks nahi bol saktay

hiba_no.1 November 16, 2007, 9:39am 14

Re: tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain

bohut khoob

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alimani786 November 16, 2007, 11:07am 15

Re: tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain

Bohot hi sundar

Ali_2 November 18, 2007, 12:41pm 16

Re: tanaao mein jab aa jaaien to dhagay toot jatay hain

thanks