"tamannaaoN se ai dil..."

koiDost · September 6, 2004, 9:53pm

aadaab dosto!

Ek Ghazal mulaahizah farmaaiy. aap kii raae kaa intizaar rahegaa.

**Ghazal

tamannaaoN se ai dil, kyaa milegaa!
jo qismat meN likhaa hogaa, milegaa

Khushii kaa jo ye ik lamhaa milaa hai
abhii maazii meN ye bhii jaa milegaa

zamaanaa ho gayaa duniyaa ko chhoRe
vahaaN ab kyaa koii apnaa milegaa!

piyaa ho aashiqii kaa dard jis ne
vo maiKhaane meN bhii pyaasaa milegaa

hamarii umr bhar kaa tajrabaa hai
jo chaaho phuul, to kaanTaa milegaa

chalegi naao sach kii jab kabhii bhii
umaNDtaa jhuuT kaa dariyaa milegaa

ye kah kar us ne mujh par zulm Dhaaye
‘tumheN phal sabr kaa achchhaa milegaa’

hazaaroN aaNdhiyaaN guzreNgii, phir bhii
mire ghar kaa diyaa jaltaa milegaa

yahii ‘Waseem’ kii hai pehchaan, yaaro
jahaaN hogaa, tumheN tanhaa milegaa !!!

Waseem Ahmed**

Pyara_sa_doost · September 7, 2004, 10:23am

gr8 dost :)

keep posting thanx

tata:)

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 8, 2004, 11:46am

*yahii ‘Waseem’ kii hai pehchaan, yaaro
jahaaN hogaa, tumheN tanhaa milegaa !!!
*

Beautiful ghazal dost jee.. ..

thanks for sharin’… keep it up :k:…

Pramod · September 8, 2004, 5:38pm

bahot achhi ghazal hai waseem bhaaii..ye do sher to bahot pasand aaye..

zamaanaa ho gayaa duniyaa ko chhoRe
vahaaN ab kyaa koii apnaa milegaa!

hazaaroN aaNdhiyaaN guzreNgii, phir bhii
mire ghar kaa diyaa jaltaa milegaa

maqta bhii achha hai.

daad kubul kijiye....

Minerva · September 9, 2004, 10:37pm

bohat achee hai Waseem. By the way, yeh saray poets nakaam ashiq kyoon hotay hain ?

Koyal · September 10, 2004, 12:34am

nice one dost keep sharin..:)

chodhry · September 10, 2004, 7:29am

Bohat achi ghazal hey waseem sahib. :k:

Well not really ‘nakam Ishaq’, all you need to have is a sensetive heart with strong feelings and an urge to write them down. Now what invokes those strong feelings in a sensetive heart is a separate story. It could be any thing even successful love experience or may be just the nature, your envoirnment anything can lead you to be a poet.
Well in my case that was 100% flirt

koiDost · September 11, 2004, 5:21pm

Pyara dost,HH Jee,Pramod Bhai,Minerva,Koyal,Chodhry Bhai ye naachiiz Ghazal pasand farmaane ke liye meraa shukriya qubuul kiijiye!

ghazal_kisi_ke · September 12, 2004, 4:33am

Re: “tamannaaoN se ai dil…”

bohut khoob jee .. :k: .. two thumbz up .. ..

thanx for sharing n keep it up .. :k: ..

koiDost · September 12, 2004, 10:52am

Thanx Ghazal

Dasht-o-Sehra · September 23, 2004, 3:31pm

Waah! Very nice!

koiDost · September 23, 2004, 4:21pm

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*Originally posted by Dasht-o-Sehra: *
Waah! Very nice!
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Thanx Dasht-o-Sehra !

Raindance · September 23, 2004, 6:13pm

zamaanaa ho gayaa duniyaa ko chhoRe
vahaaN ab kyaa koii apnaa milegaa!

wah janab,khoob kaha app nay,,kuch aur bhi ho to irshaad,,,

show_sha · September 23, 2004, 7:10pm

zindabad waseem bhai......bahut accha Mashallah////khayaal aur luzon ka taal mail bahut khooburat

koiDost · September 23, 2004, 8:36pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Raindance: *
zamaanaa ho gayaa duniyaa ko chhoRe
vahaaN ab kyaa koii apnaa milegaa!

wah janab,khoob kaha app nay,,kuch aur bhi ho to irshaad,,,
[/QUOTE]

Ghazal pasand farmaane kaa bahut bahut shukriya!

koiDost · September 23, 2004, 8:37pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by show_sha: *
zindabad waseem bhai......bahut accha Mashallah////khayaal aur luzon ka taal mail bahut khooburat
[/QUOTE]

Aapkii zarraanawaazii ke liye behad mamnuun huuN.