kuch thay adhoore kuch kuch poore
dard se bheege khwab tamam
sab tehreerain goongi ho gaeen
gang hain mere baab tamam
kya kya qyamat mujh pe tooti
phir bhi na hue azab tamam
ankhain dhool se att si gaeen
theher se gaye gardaab tamam
dil ne cherri taan ajab si
muqfil ho gay rubab tamam
ik pyas jagi anokhi
bujha na paye jise aab tamam
wo kaisa mukhtasar sa sawal tha
k mar gay mere jawab tamam
ik sehmi chirrya bazi le gai
urr gay pal main surkhaab tamam
wo dil ka phaphola phatt gya aj
hanste thay jis pe ehbab tamam…
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boht aala hamesha ki tarah lajawab. Shazia aapa boht acha likhti hain ap. parh ke lutf aata hai :k:
Sannan
4
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Baghour parhnay par tamam cheezain aapni apni jagah par milli aur asaan alfaz kay chunao nam Ghazal mein jaan daal di …buhat khoub 
Waisay nayaab parinday zaroor dal daiti hain aap 
Rukhab
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thanx 
han han naye parinday hotay hain her wari…ab next poem main Sannaan chirra
Sannan
7
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Sannan Stylish likh marna 
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agar marna hai toh chirra he theek hai,Sannaan mare hue chirre
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wao what a thaka hua name…1962 ki extras ki yad dila di 
Sannan
12
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phaoploay ka matlub batao me ko 
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mjhese kiya puch rhay hai shazia apa se puche 
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ap ko pata hai na to thand rakhain…baba ki insult mujh se bardasht nai hoti 
Sannan
17
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acha 
pooch laita hoon bhai
theek hay 
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Is mein hansay walu kiya baat hai 
Sannan
19
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mairay liye hansay key baat aur tumahray liye ronnay ka muqam hay
bus daikh lain 