Taluq Toarta Hoon To Mukamal Toar Deata Hoon

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Dania December 23, 2007, 7:18pm 1

				 						 						 							 							 								***Taluq Toarta Hoon To Mukamal Toar Deata Hoon

Jisy Ma Choar Deata Hoon Mukamal Choar Deata Hoon

Mohabt Ho Ke Nufrat Ho Bhara Rehta Hoon Shidat Sy
Jidhar Sy Aaye Yeah Dariya Uudhar He Moar Deata Hoon

Yaqeen Rakhta Nahi Hoon Ma Kisi Kuchay Taluq Par
Jo Dhaaga Tootny Wala Ho Uus Ko Toar Deata Hoon

Mery Deakhy Houye Sapny Kahin Lehraian Na Ly Jaian
Gharondy Rait Ke Tameer Kr Ke Choar Deata Hoon

“Adeem” Ab Tak Wohi Buchpan Wohi Takhreeb-Kaari Hai
Qafus Ko Toar Deata Hoon Parindy Choar Deata Hoon***

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Koyal December 23, 2007, 7:54pm 2

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nice one dani thanks 4 sharing it again :)

deadsoul December 23, 2007, 9:44pm 3

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nice

redidentity December 24, 2007, 6:22am 4

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buhat khoob :)

padfoot December 24, 2007, 6:57am 5

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Nice :)

sunny_nicky December 24, 2007, 1:53pm 6

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Yaqeen Rakhta Nahi Hoon Ma Kisi Kuchay Taluq Par
Jo Dhaaga Tootny Wala Ho Uus Ko Toar Deata Hoon

i agree :) nicee dania

moonmine December 24, 2007, 4:34pm 7

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Mery Deakhy Houye Sapny Kahin Lehraian Na Ly Jaian
Gharondy Rait Ke Tameer Kr Ke Choar Deata Hoon

o its Gr8!

bheegiyaad December 24, 2007, 5:49pm 8

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very nice :k:

Sheal December 24, 2007, 6:20pm 9

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nice sharing :k:

nokia_n70 December 24, 2007, 6:36pm 10

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Yaqeen Rakhta Nahi Hoon Ma Kisi Kuchay Taluq Par
Jo Dhaaga Tootny Wala Ho Uus Ko Toar Deata Hoon
Wa h wa boht khoob !
per dania ge kucj rishtay tottay tottay jur b jatay hian so pehlay he tord dena ache baat nhi hote :)

The Random Thread

Shab-e-Hijar December 24, 2007, 6:54pm 11

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hmmmm....

Aryaan December 24, 2007, 8:18pm 12

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Bohat khoob Dania...

Dania May 15, 2008, 8:01pm 13

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:)

what's the damage ?

WiseGuy May 15, 2008, 8:08pm 14

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Wah bohat khoob,
kia takhreeb kaar qism kee poetry hai, toR phoR say bharpoor.