Talluq tot jaega mera sary zmany se

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Talluq tot jaega mera sary zmany se,
Mere apny khafa honge tmhen apna banany se.

Tmhary sath rehny se muje tasken milti hai,
Bhot takleef hoti he tmhary dor jany se.

Mere ghr ko jala dena magr ye zehen men rkhna,
Ujala mil nhi skta kisi ka ghr jalany se.

Hmari jaan jaygi to phir jaan jaogy,
K hasil kuch nhi hota kisi ko azmany se.

Tmhara naam kesy mita don apni kahani sy,
Boht gehra talluq he tera mere fasany se**

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Re: Talluq tot jaega mera sary zmany se

**Mere ghr ko jala dena magr ye zehen men rkhna,
Ujala mil nhi skta kisi ka ghr jalany se.

:lajawab:
**

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Re: Talluq tot jaega mera sary zmany se

**Tmhara naam kesy mita don apni kahani sy,
Boht gehra talluq he tera mere fasany se

:k:

Remind me this line of mine:

Tujh se apna taluq kaise toRoon aakhir
ek yehi to poonji hai umr ke khazanon main
**

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Re: Talluq tot jaega mera sary zmany se

Lovely :lajawab: both the shers…enter10 wala and muqawwee wala

But is it a wise decision to leave everyone for the sake of one person?

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Re: Talluq tot jaega mera sary zmany se

I hate the kind of love which demands ‘Jeena sirf mere liye’. I would let her go away, if she demands this

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Reminds me of a paki serial.... meri ladli...i just saw a few minutes of it...but wht i understood was...tht the guy loves a girl who doesnt want to take care of his parents...he marries tht girl n stays kaheen aur with her...n marries another girl just to take care of his parents...
Wht you said above , would you classify the first girl in tht category ?

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Re: Talluq tot jaega mera sary zmany se

Yes it falls under that category. I'm very strict in this sense. for me, mehboob ki her cheez her rishte se muhabbat honi chahiye

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Kinda makes sense....but then again....kind! doesnt make sense....
I guess for it to make sense mohabbat mai hona zaroori hai.

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muhabbat main kia hona zaroori hai. selfishness?

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Nai insan ko mohabbat mai mubtala hona zarori hai to understand wht you said.
Cuz even if i love someone…i still wont want to cook :crying: and in turn he wont be happy…his family wont be happy :frowning:

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Re: Talluq tot jaega mera sary zmany se

There is a thing called adjustment and adaptability that one has to follow when he / she falls in love. Without that no relationship works IMO

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Re: Talluq tot jaega mera sary zmany se

Haan tou baqi sub adjust :hehe:

Oke oke ill cook…but i dont want tooo :teary2:

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Re: Talluq tot jaega mera sary zmany se

adjustment and adaptability tou hur jagah chahiye hoti hsi...be it love or no love....

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Re: Talluq tot jaega mera sary zmany se

True, but its a package deal in love. If someone can't adopt the people and thing his /her mehboob love, then there is no need to move forward in such relationship

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Wht if while adapting he/she becomes miserable too...cuz bohot zyadah adaptation does tht to a person.

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Re: Talluq tot jaega mera sary zmany se

neyat saaf manzil aasan :halo:

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Re: Talluq tot jaega mera sary zmany se

Aaj k dunya jiss beychare k niyat saaf hoti hai...wohi kha liya jata hai by others.

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Name pleej.............:D

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:rotfl:

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Re: Talluq tot jaega mera sary zmany se

I had already done so.. aur jo chala gaya uska naam kuch bhi ho kia farq paRta hai