**yeh chaman zaar yeh jamna ka kinara yeh mehal
yeh munaqqash dar-o-deewaar yeh mehrab yeh taaq
ik shahenshah nay apni dolat ka sahara lay kar
hum ghareebon ki mohabbat ka uraya hay mazaaq
meray mehboob kahin or mila kar mujh say**
khushi hogi agar koi is ghazal ko mukammal karday
Lo ji....pehli baar kuch post kiya aur vo bhee poora nahi kar sakey...kar lo gal.
bhai zaroori nahi k har namukammal cheez ADHORI bhi ho, khair aik or magar mukammal,
**
kitnay ghum alfaz k pichay
chehray num alfaz k pichay
dhondh sako tu hum ko dhondho
kuch mubhim alfaz k pichay
waqt rukhsat chehra weraan
ankhain num alfaz k pichay
aik tha mosam ankh main uski
aik mosam alfaz k pichay
SARA HUSUN HAY UNWANON MAIN
mani kum alfaz k pichay
maykhana si soorat agay
jam-e-jam alfaz k pichay
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*Originally posted by listener-leo: *
bhai zaroori nahi k har namukammal cheez ADHORI bhi ho, khair aik or magar mukammal,
**
kitnay ghum alfaz k pichay
chehray num alfaz k pichay
dhondh sako tu hum ko dhondho
kuch mubhim alfaz k pichay
waqt rukhsat chehra weraan
ankhain num alfaz k pichay
aik tha mosam ankh main uski
aik mosam alfaz k pichay
SARA HUSUN HAY UNWANON MAIN
mani kum alfaz k pichay
maykhana si soorat agay
jam-e-jam alfaz k pichay**
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So lovely...kia kehnay... bohat alaa choice hai aapki... bohat khobsorat laffazi hai...
Welcome to GS and thanks for sharing...
** thanx P}{ä®mä©Ï§t for appreciating** :D