rules: nothing sentimental.
instead gazal is fine.
clue: try using songs/ gazals which have questions in them.
idea is to have a good decent conversation even tongue in cheeck humor in a non conventional method of speech.
so who will begin the first song talk?
Re: talk in song
haar ek baat pay kahtay ho. Tum kay tu kia hai ?
tum hee kahoo kay yea andazay Gufta'goo kia hai?
Re: talk in song
Akeli na bazaar jaya karo
Nazar lag jaye gi
Sab ki nazar mai na aya karo
Nazar lag jaye gi
Aya hai Maheena-e-Ramzaan
Mujhe tum laa dooooooo Shezaan
Nazar lag jaye gi
Re: talk in song
tum itna kyoon muskura rahey ho
kiya gem hey jo chupa rahey ho?
(& chothey bhai, how will shezan help?) :>
zobia
October 11, 2007, 4:13am
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Re: talk in song
aye jazba-e-dil gar may jaoon
to saamunay manzil a ajeyea
manzil k leya doo gaam chaloon
or saamunay manzil a geya
p.s. i admit i m not a poetry person but still i do gonna give it a shot here.
n i know wat ever i wrote is WRONG
Re: talk in song
aye dil-e-nadan
arzoo kia hai
justa jo kia hai ?
Hum Bahtaak thay hain
kyun baahtak tay hain?
dasht O shaaraa meiin
aysay lagatah hai
moaaj peeyaas hai
apnay daryaa mein
kaysi uljan hai
kyun ya uljan hai ?
ek sayaah say
roo baroo kia ai ?
Re: talk in song
aye jazba-e-dil gar may joon hoon
to saamunay manzil a ajeyea
manzil k leya doo gaam chaloon
or saamunay manzil a geya
p.s. i admit i m not a poetry person but still i do give a shot here.
n i know wat ever i wrote is WRONG
ay jazba-e- dil gar mein chah’hoon , tu samnay manzil aja’aay
manzil kay leay do gaaam challoon or samnay manzil aaja’aay !
zobia
October 11, 2007, 4:19am
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Re: talk in song
wats a difference
ok i know i am bad in poetry. in fact worst in remembering it. but still that was rite
Re: talk in song
song is lyrical, gazal is musical. or vice verse. ?
Re: talk in song
yeye zameen chup hey
asman chup hey
phir yeye dherken si char soo kiya hey?
see Zobia, song has a rhyme scheme. which gazal can also have.
but gazal is more musical.
Aliyish
October 11, 2007, 4:22am
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Re: talk in song
Jani'yaaAaaaaaaa
Haanniiiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
tayray bin nahii lagdaa dil mayray dhol'naa !
zobia
October 11, 2007, 4:27am
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Re: talk in song
wo kon thee
tamam shehair us k husan may gum tha
wo kia gaeya
phir dil to mustakil khaza ka musam tha
wo kia phoool thee? khuboo thee? kia thee wowoooooo?
wo kon thee?
(dats a first ver song where i stressed to memorize it :@:)
Re: talk in song
ankhian na maar vey yar sajna, tenu nayi karna pyar sajna:snooty:
Aliyish
October 11, 2007, 4:29am
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Re: talk in song
tere bin mein yun kaysay jeeya
kaysay jeeyaa
tere bin
lay kar yaadien tayree
raaatien maree kaat'een
muj say baatien tayree
karte hai chandniii
tanha hai tujbinn raatien maayree
din mayray , din kay jaysay nahi
tanha bandan , tanha hai rooh
naam mayre ankhain rahay
aja mayray ab ro baro
jeena nahe abb bin tayray
tere bin mein yun kaysay jeeya
kaysay jeeyaa
tere bin
zobia
October 11, 2007, 4:30am
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Re: talk in song
agha apni maut say koe bashar nahi
sama-an soo baras ka hai pal ke khaber nahi
ps. sorry dushi i like ur threadz :@:
Re: talk in song
kuch is tarah teri palke meri palko se miladay
anso tere saray meri palko pay sajadain
Re: talk in song
aaaj bazaar mey, pa bey jolaan chalo
rakhte dil tham lo
dil figaro chalo
aaj hum hi katel ho aei yaroon chalo..
Furqan
October 11, 2007, 4:33am
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Re: talk in song
aye dil-e-nadan
arzoo kia hai
justa jo kia hai ?
Hum Bahtaak thay hain
kyun baahtak tay hain?
dasht O shaaraa meiin
aysay lagatah hai
moaaj peeyaas hai
apnay daryaa mein
kaysi uljan hai
kyun ya uljan hai ?
ek sayaah say
roo baroo kia ai ?
wah wah wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dil khush kitta
Aliyish
October 11, 2007, 4:35am
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Re: talk in song
To really love a woman
To understand her - you gotta know her deep inside
Hear every thought - see every dream
N' give her wings - when she wants to fly
Then when you find yourself lyin' helpless in her arms
Ya know ya really love a woman
When you love a woman you tell her
that she's really wanted
When you love a woman you tell her that she's the one
Cuz she needs somebody to tell her
that it's gonna last forever
So tell me have you ever really
really really ever loved a woman?