Re: Takmeel
v nice thanks 4 sahrin :)
Re: Takmeel
very nice but maham i think you should write in roman urdu as well, as some of our readers can't read urdu ..........
Re: Takmeel
Very nice stuff mahamkhan :k: Thanx for sharing it with us 
Re: Takmeel
Nice.. :k:
Re: Takmeel
Zabardast :k:
Re: Takmeel
very nice but maham i think you should write in roman urdu as well, as some of our readers can't read urdu ..........
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Thanx a lotttt
Nikami jano,Sannan,Amal,Shumaisa & PA
Re: Takmeel
Sari cheezein hi namukammal hain
kuch bi poora nahi hai paas merey
namukammal hai ruttjagon ka safer
khawaab bi hain sabhi aadhorey se
aur taheel ki wadiyoun mein kahiin
chund ghazlein bhatktii rehtii hain
ju ponchtii nahi hain kagaaz per
aur ager yeh poonch bi jayein tu
poora hota nahi hai shair koii
chund nazmein bi hain aadhorii ju
zehan mein aa ke lout jatii hain
jaisey mayoos ki dua koii
dil se nikley falak se takraye
aur phir be aserr hi lout aaye
kuch bi poora nahii hai paas merey
saarey jazbey hi namukammal hain
barahaa dhondney ki koshish kii
khoo gayaa apnaa app janey kahaan
hum ne dhoonda yahan wahaan khood ko
khooj aaye kahan kahan khood ko
mil na paaya mager saraag koii
safer e aagahii aadhoraa hai
mera sub kuch abhii aadhora haii
kuch bi poora nahi haii paas merey
saarey sapney hi namukammal hain
chund ahbaab se bhi milna tha
per aadhorii hain sub mulakatein
youn tu milta hoon har kisii se mager
poora milta nahi kisii se bii
shayed apnii hi zindgii se bii
khatt bi kuch tere naam likhney thay
woh bi porrey na ho sakey aab tak
kuch bi poora nahi hai paas merey
saarey wadey hi namukammal hain
kuch kitabein ke jin ko parnaa tha
woh bhii abb tak younhi parii hain kahiin
sirf du chaar hi warqq palttey
dil ko phir yeh khayaal aaney lagaa
saarey safhoon ko choor doon aaisay **
**zindgii ke tamam rishtoon koo
kyon na chuup chhap toor doon aaisey
kuch bi poora nahi hai paas merey
saarey rishtey hi namukammal hain
manjammd silsaloon mein halchal hoo
ghum ke sehraoon mein bhi jal thal hoo
zindagi ka sabhii aadhoraa pan
tum chaley aao tu mukammal hoo
Re: Takmeel
Nice Poem mahamkhan! thanks for shairing :)
Re: Takmeel
Thanks a lot Maham G for roman urdu .....
Re: Takmeel
Buhat khoob Maham, your choice always good, just like me:~) well thanks for sharing
Re: Takmeel
Thanx... BB
Buhat khoob Maham, your choice always good, just like me:~) well thanks for sharing
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Thanx a lot....Gul.....meri post pasand karney ka aur tumhari bi choice hamesha bohat acchi hoti haiii
Re: Takmeel
Very nice :-)
Re: Takmeel
Thanx Innocent smile
Re: Takmeel
bohat khooob..
Re: Takmeel
Thnx Eemaan