tairee nazar hai, mairaa dil hai
kiya kiya ja-aay
khirad junoon kay muqabil hai
kiya kiya ja-aay
hum apnay ghum ka fasana sunanay aa-ay thay
magar yay aap ki mehfil hai kiya kiya ja-ay
yay aik daagh-ae-muhabbat kahaan chupaa rakhoon
tamaam umr ka haasil hai kiya kiya jaa-ay…
jhuka diya hai muhabbat nay aap kay dar per
nazar uthaaoon yay mushkil hai kiya kiya ja-ay…
kiya kiya ja-aay…
Kay hum tu Dhoop main baarishh kay woh qatray hain jo gir ker, dar-o-deevar per hi sookh jaatay hain…
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Bohot ache Dhoop jee!!
achi nazm he .. aur janab aapko tou pata he hay ke main zara dhaka start kisam ka shair hoon so, after reading your “kia kiya ja-ay” I wrote my own “kia kiya ja-ay”
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peesh-e-khidmat he ..
paet main dard bohot he, magar khana tou lazim he .. kia kiya ja-ay ? gosht khane ko mann he karta, par aaj tou mangal he .. kia kiya ja-ay ? pakai main ne he murghi, magar ismain bhe namak kam hey .. kia kiya ja-ay ? aur kuch milna nahi, aaj tou hotel bhe saarey band hain .. kia kiya ja-ay ?dil chah raha he barish main ghoomne ko, par maheena yea sitamber he .. kia kiya ja-ay ?
soocha chalo shower hee le lia jai, par aaj tou paani bhe band he .. kia kiya ja-ay ?
satya naas ho water-supply walon ka, har-rooz inki yehi gand he .. kia kiya ja-ay ?
soocha ke aunty ke ghar jaa kar naha loon, par wahan tou churailon jesi eik cousin he .. kia kiya ja-ay ?
miti pao nahane par, chalo office ko chalte hain, ufff apni gari ka tou tyre bhe puncture he .. kia kiya ja-ay ?
tyre change tou karloon magar eik masla he, waqt office main bohot hi kam he .. kia kiya ja-ay ?
taxi lenay se bhe ghabra raha hoon, pocket main aaj bohot hi kam rakam he … kia kiya ja-ay ?
paidal he chalte hain aaj Azam jee, waqt ka yea eik aur sitam he .. kia kiya ja-ay ?
jee tou karta he karoon aur shairee lekin .. Moderator ka ye thread he .. kia kiya ja-ay ?
by me
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hope u like it
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**I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.
[This message has been edited by Azam#1 (edited May 13, 2002).]
is cousin walay jumlay maiN bohat dard hai…
kiya baat hai…ho sakta hai hum aap ko mushwara day daiN kay kiya kiya ja’aay
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Kay hum tu Dhoop main baarishh kay woh qatray hain jo gir ker, dar-o-deevar per hi sookh jaatay hain…
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buhat khubsoorat
thanks 4 sharing
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yaar mashwara dene ke koi zaroorat nahi … ye sirf eik khayali cousin he
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apni tou saari cousins hamse 10 yan 15 saal choti hain .. kia kiya ja-aay
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I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.
achii lagi hai poem dhoop jee 'kiya kiya ja-aay'???
---~---Maria---~---
~Kiya haaq wo jeena hai jo apnay hi liyay ho
Khud mit kar kisi aur ko mitnay se bacha lay~
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very funny…very nice…kiya baat hai aap ki azam jee
—~—Maria—~—
~Kiya haaq wo jeena hai jo apnay hi liyay ho
Khud mit kar kisi aur ko mitnay se bacha lay~
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Bohot bohot shukriya Maheen jee
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well!! tumko haste dekh kar wajida tabasum ka eik shair yaad aa gaya …
yaa to mitt jaaiye yaa mita deejye .. keejiye jab bhi sauda khara keejiye ..apne chehre se zulfain hata deejiye ..
aur phir chaand kaa saamnaa keejiye ..
har taraf phool hi phool khil jainge ..
aap aise hi haste raha keejiye ..
flirt karne wala icon
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I am like an Open Book Except for the few pages of my past, My life is an empty book. It takes the shape of a mystery, To me it does at least. For I cannot tell what happens next, Too many cliffhangers and too much suspense. But its clues all lead eventually to the same place, Unfortunately it does not say where. It only says get the next book, For in this one you’ ve ran out of room.
[This message has been edited by Azam#1 (edited May 18, 2002).]
** wah jee wah
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kamal kay sher hayn is thread mein tau!!! **