taeree tawaju kae telubgar.........

aadhoorighazal · January 26, 2003, 3:43pm

chet parnae ka waqat aaya tu koi nahin aaya
dewar giranae ko razakar bohat thae,

hanstee hui aankhoon ka nagar kehtae rahae hum
jis seher main nohae pus-e-dewar bohat thae

yeh berukhee ik roz tu maqsoom thee aapni
hum taeree tawaju kae telubgar bohat thae

Philanthrope · January 26, 2003, 3:47pm

Wah..

Pehli_Kiran · January 26, 2003, 3:48pm

Wah...thank you for sharing adhori :~)

Azad · January 26, 2003, 4:03pm

Re: taeree tawaju kae telubgar.........

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by aadhoorighazal: *
chet parnae ka waqat aaya tu koi nahin aaya
dewar giranae ko razakar bohat thae,

[/QUOTE]

aadhoori jee koi kia karay ... aik to Gidh bohut hain ... 2) aik miyan main aik hi talwar aa sakti hay ...

anyways its deep true thought expressed in excellent way.. thanks for sharing and keep posting

Dilsay · January 26, 2003, 4:48pm

Beautiful and thanks for posting.....

XChorniX · January 26, 2003, 5:48pm

bohot khoob :k:

aadhoorighazal · January 26, 2003, 6:01pm

thanks pharmacist,
pehli kiran,
dilsay,
chorni and azad sb.thanks a lot.

HeArT_HaCKeR · January 26, 2003, 6:05pm

nice one :k:

Dragon_King · January 26, 2003, 6:06pm

nice :k:

arifnawaz1 · January 26, 2003, 6:22pm

Bahut khoob :k::k::k:

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Woh chup chaap khara hai tera kya lagta hai

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Mein ne socha thaa ke abaad hoon ik shehar mein, ‘mein’
Yaan tu har shaks ka andaaz juda lagta hai

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ghazal_kisi_ke · January 27, 2003, 12:14am

bohtu khoob AG:k::k: