"tadees-e-talab"...merii ek nazam

[KKF]

Re: “tadees-e-talab”…merii ek nazam

@fara

Awesome… KKF kiya baat hay aapki…

shukria Fara Bhabhii aapkaa bahooot bahooooot…aapkii zarra navaazii hai

@IS

Bohat khoob aor nazamien b likhni chiye
ar aap jaise acha likhne wale ko nazmain b likthte rehna chiaye

IS Bhaaii aapkaa beHad shukria k aane nazam pasand farmaayii iA, dekhiiye koshish karuuNgaa agar dil aamaadah huaa to…vaise, dil to mushkil kaamoN se apnaa daaman bachaataa hai

@Amal

Mujhey nazm hamesha sey is leeye ziaada pasand rahi hey ke ye gheir’zaroori funni masloN meiN uljhey bina, likhney waaley ko apney jazbaat aur ehsaasaat khul kar bayaan karney deti hey. Aap yaqeenan itni hi aasaani sey ghazal bhi keh letey hoN ge, lekin shaed dil sey aap ye bhi tasleem kareiN ke nazm kehna ghazal kehney sey be’had aasaan hey. Rahi baat maqbooliat ki, to us ki gawaahi to aap khud hi dey chukey heiN
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aapkii baat solah aane durust hai. isii liye to maathaa pachchii nahiiN kartaa nazam meN lol…Ghazal meN aasaanii hotii hai aur jaldi se mukammil bhii ho jaatii hai…mujhe jaise kaahil vujuud ke liye Ghazal emN aasaanii hotii hai :D**

Aek likhaari ke tor par aap ye feisla kar saktey heiN ke aap ke nazm doobara na nilkheiN, lekin aey qaari ke tor par meiN samajhta hooN ke ye feisla aap ki apni zaat ke saath aek barri na’insaafi ho gi.

Aek likhaari ke tor par aap ye daawa kar saktey heiN ke aap ghazal kehney meiN mahaarat rakhtey heiN, lekin aek qaari ke tor par mujhey ye arz karney ki ijaazat dijeeye ke meiN ney aaj tak aap ki koi ghazal is qadar khoobsoorat aur bharpoor nahi paai, jitni ke ye nazm hey.

**inshaa Allah koshish karuuNgaa k kuchh safHe siyaah kar sakuuN shukria pasandeedgii ke liye
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@ehsan

KKF aap toh chupey rustam niklay. Mashallah

**shukria janaab e man…chhupaa hii rahna chaahtaa huN lol…

band muTThii laakh kii
khul jaaye to Khaak kii :)**

@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

bohat khoob nazm hay, Kisi Filmi Director sey baat ki :-d Sahir k zamanay meiN aesey Geet bana kartay they , is nazm k andaaz-e-bayaaN meiN bhi kahin wuh Rang paaya jaata hay Jo Sahir Sahib k Shaairi meiN paaya jaata tha , aik Khoobsurat nazm paish karney par daad qabool kijiye, Umeed hay aap aur nazm bhi jald hi share kareiN ge

**shukria ji, shukria…aapne to mujhe podeene ke peR pe chaRhaa diyaa…lol…cheh piddi cheh piddi kaa shorbaa…kahaaN SaaHir saaHib aur kahaN maiN…

vo shahnshaah e aalam e shaa’irii
maiN gadaa e kocha e saaHirii ****

vaise, aapkii Hausalah afzaaii aur pazeeraaii ke liye maiN bahot mamnoon aur mutashakkir huN. :)**