.. taamam loog akaalay, rah-bar hee naa thaa ..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

ghazal_kisi_ke July 2, 2005, 2:25am 1

taamam loog akaalay, rah-bar hee naa thaa
becharnay walo`n main ek mera humsafar he na tha

barhayna shakoo`n ka jungle gaara tha aankon main
woh raat thee kay kahin chaand ka guzar he na tha

tumharay shehar ke her chahon mehrbaan thee magar
jaha`n pay dohp karee thee wahan shajar he na thaa

samait latee shikasta gulab ke khusboo
hawa kay hath main aisa koi hunr he na tha

main itnay sanpo`n ko rastay main dekh aye thee
kay teray shehar main pohnche to koi dar he na tha

kahan say ate kiran zindagee kay zandaa`n main
woh ghar mila tha mujhe jis main koi dar he na tha

badan main pehl gaya surkh bail ke manind
woh zakham sokta kia, jiska chara-gar he na tha

hawa kay layay hoay beej phir hawa ko gayay
kehlay thay pohl kuch aisay kay jin main zar he na tha

qadam to rait pay sahil nay bhi na rakhnay diya
badan ko jakray hoay sirf ek bahnwaar he na tha

BY: My all time fav and one of the finest poet I have read, Parveen Shakir :k:

shoaib_akhter July 2, 2005, 3:36am 2

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bohat khoob

system July 2, 2005, 4:10am 3

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Beautiful ghazal... thank you so much for sharing... Parveen Shakir has always been one of my fav poets... :-)

Bolnay Waley cheezain...... (merged)

Koyal July 2, 2005, 4:13am 4

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:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke July 2, 2005, 11:25pm 5

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shoaib bahii, KN and koyal thankew for liking =))

KN: my pleasure.. She has written many masterpieces.. Her poetry touches my heart.. a great poet indeed

Tu ...

maddi July 2, 2005, 11:26pm 6

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such a lovely ghazal thx 4 sharing GKK

Tu ...

ghazal_kisi_ke July 2, 2005, 11:28pm 7

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^ thankew and my pleasure =))

AQ July 3, 2005, 4:40am 8

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Very nice poem… one of my fovorites as well

I wrote something in the same Zameen:

http://www.paklinks.com/gs/showthread.php?t=186931

thanks!

----> TimePass

HeArT_HaCKeR July 3, 2005, 10:25am 9

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Boht khoob :)

system July 3, 2005, 12:36pm 10

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very nice :k::k:
thanks for sharing ..

taaraa July 3, 2005, 2:48pm 11

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bohat achay

ghazal_kisi_ke July 3, 2005, 8:55pm 12

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thanx everyone and my pleasure =))

IS July 4, 2005, 1:42am 13

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Very Nice
Thanks For sharing

LONDON........

ghazal_kisi_ke July 4, 2005, 5:03am 14

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^ *** thankew IS and you're welcome =))***