SJ
July 6, 2007, 4:17pm
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Main sun kay us ke sabhi batain
Faqt itna he kehte thi
Khafa hona mana laina
Yeh sadiyeoon ke rewayat hai
Mohabbat ke aalamat hai
Gilay shikway kero mujh say
Tumhain jana ijazat hai
Magar ik baat mere yaad rakhna tum
Kabhi aisa bhe hota hai
Hawaain rukh badaltee hain
Khazaain lout jate hain
Khafaa hona bhe mumkin hai
Khata hona bhe mumkin hai
Magar hathoon say daman
Kabhi choota nahi kertay
Hamaisha yaad rakhna tum
Taluk rooth janay say
Kabhi toota nahi kertay
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Re: Ta'aluq Rooth Janay Say .........
nice sharing:)
Re: Ta'aluq Rooth Janay Say .........
itna acha laga k words nahi mil rahey bohat khoob
excellent
superb or purey dil ke gherayeun sey keh rahi hoon.
Re: Ta'aluq Rooth Janay Say .........
Bohat hi khubsurat,,,really nice..
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:k:
babri
July 6, 2007, 7:20pm
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Re: Ta'aluq Rooth Janay Say .........
bohot khoob SJ
Re: Ta'aluq Rooth Janay Say .........
very nice poem sonia:-)
Re: Ta’aluq Rooth Janay Say …
Hamaisha yaad rakhna tum
Taluk rooth janay say
Kabhi toota nahi kertay
Very true:k:
Thanx for sharing!!!
SJ
July 7, 2007, 8:32am
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Re: Ta'aluq Rooth Janay Say .........
nice sharing:)
thanks :)
SJ
July 7, 2007, 8:33am
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Re: Ta'aluq Rooth Janay Say .........
itna acha laga k words nahi mil rahey bohat khoob
excellent
superb or purey dil ke gherayeun sey keh rahi hoon.
pasand kernay ka bohat bohat shukria :)
Re: Ta’aluq Rooth Janay Say …
Really Very Beautiful..
Re: Ta'aluq Rooth Janay Say .........
awesome
zabardast
khob
SJ
July 8, 2007, 7:21pm
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Re: Ta’aluq Rooth Janay Say …
Really Very Beautiful..
thanks alot
SJ
July 8, 2007, 7:21pm
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Re: Ta'aluq Rooth Janay Say .........
awesome
zabardast
khob
Thanks :)
SJ
July 9, 2007, 4:47pm
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Re: Ta'aluq Rooth Janay Say .........
Bohat hi khubsurat,,,really nice..
thanks :)
SJ
July 9, 2007, 4:48pm
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Re: Ta’aluq Rooth Janay Say …
thanks
SJ
July 9, 2007, 4:48pm
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Re: Ta'aluq Rooth Janay Say .........
bohot khoob SJ
pasand kernay ka shukria :)
Daanie
July 9, 2007, 7:04pm
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Re: Ta'aluq Rooth Janay Say .........
buhut khoobsurat :)
SJ
July 10, 2007, 8:57am
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Re: Ta'aluq Rooth Janay Say .........
very nice poem sonia:-)
thank u :)
SJ
July 10, 2007, 8:58am
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thanks alot dear