Taa'look toor dainay say, kabhi tota nahi kartay...!!!

Innocent_Attitude · February 20, 2008, 10:14am

Main sunn k uss ki sab batain
Faqat itna hi kehta hoon
Khafa hona
Mana laina
Yeh sadiyoon say riwayat hai
Muhabat ki aalamat hai
Gilay shikway karo mujh say
Tumhain yara eejaazat hai
Magar ik baat meri bhi zara tum yaad rakhna
Kabhi aisa bhi hota hai
Hawain rukh badal’ti hain
Khizaa’ain laaot aati hian
Khataa’ain ho bhi jati hain
Khafa hona bhi mum’kin hai
Khata hona bhi mum’kin hai
Hamesha yaad rakhna tum
Taa’look toor dainay say, kabhi tota nahi kartay…!!!

muncho · February 20, 2008, 1:06pm

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waah bahut khoob kaha g

NikamiJano · February 20, 2008, 1:26pm

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sahi kaha Taa’look toor dainay say, kabhi tota nahi kartay…!!!
v nice post

Innocent_Attitude · February 20, 2008, 6:25pm

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Thank you for the appreciation muncho & NikamiJano. :)Waise NikamiJano, Kia ap koi taa'look torna chah rahi thi, jo meri poem na bacha lia? :p

NikamiJano · February 20, 2008, 7:43pm

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not really me tu joR rehi idheR udher se assume kaR k :p

Shab-e-Hijar · February 20, 2008, 8:35pm

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Nice :k:

Sheal · February 20, 2008, 8:52pm

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nice sharing :k:

being_lonely · February 20, 2008, 9:20pm

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:k:

Starlight · February 20, 2008, 10:02pm

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Nice.

reet · February 21, 2008, 8:35am

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Taa'look toor dainay say, kabhi tota nahi kartay...!!!

nice sharing............g

Zakhmi_Umar · February 21, 2008, 9:25am

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buhat khoob thanx for sharing :k:

Innocent_Attitude · February 22, 2008, 10:00am

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Thank you every one. :)

Daanie · February 22, 2008, 10:17am

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wonderful sharing :)

Innocent_Attitude · February 22, 2008, 10:36am

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** Thank you Daanie** :)

babri · February 22, 2008, 1:08pm

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:k: