Wo zindagi pyasi rahi barsaat k ta-qub main
jis ka sira mil na saka,main iss bat k ta-qub main
roshni kharamaan kharaman thi mehv-e-safar
phir ikk din dooba ikk raat k ta-qub main
dhoonda us gohar ko sehra-o-dusht main
“jo kho gaya tha teri zaat k ta-qub main”
hath khole hun kharra us maseeha k samne
meri zaat kashkol bani manajat k ta-qub main
qatra qatra jo rooh ko seraab kar de
main uss haseen mulaqat k ta-qub main…
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Bohat achi ghazal kahi hey aap ney :k: … hamaarey saath share karne ke leeye shukriya 
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hmmm Alfaaz ka chunao khoob kiya hai...achi kavish rahi..khush rahiye :-)
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thanx g…ho gai khush or ainda b rahun gi inshallah 
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thanx 
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boht achi ghazal hai Shazia…i really i liked it
main to abi ap ki pichli ghazal ke sahar se hi nai nikali 
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awwwwwwwwwwwwww thanx chanda
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Please provide meaning of:
Ta_qab
mevh-e-safar
kharamaan
kashkol
manajat
By the way, I dont know the actual meaning >>what I guess...it is nice ahsaa-saat (rumaani feelings) in this gazal.
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Please provide meaning of: Ta_qab mevh-e-safar kharamaan kashkol manajat
By the way, I dont know the actual meaning >>what I guess...it is nice ahsaa-saat (rumaani feelings) in this gazal.
thanx rajey.
ta-qub: peecha karna
mahv-e-safar:safar main.
kharamaan kharamaan: ahista ahista.
manajat:wo nazam jis main khuda ki tareef kar k dua mangi gai ho.
kashkol:kasa ya wo bartan jis main fakeer khairaat leta hai.
hope its clear now:)
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As I guess before... it's is a nice rumaani gazalnuma.....
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thanx again..han g mujhe b “numa” he lag rhi hai 
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Dar Asal Meri aur Tumhaari gazalain “On the scale of GAZAL” shayad makool nahi baithti hongi… to hich-kichatay hue hum unhe aasani se GAZAL"NUMA" to kah hi saktay hain… Is se humaara dil bhi rah jaata hai aur Gazalkaaron ko bhi taqleef nahi hogi…
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v well said 
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Simply terrific Shazia but this she'r is really awesome ....
dhoonda us gohar ko sehra-o-dusht main
"jo kho gaya tha teri zaat k ta-qub main"
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wah ustad-e-mohtaram barri entry mari,lagta hai ravi ab chain he chain likhta hai well thanx for liking.
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meri dosri entry check kar li ho gi
hun aaram aaye :cobra:
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han g ker li 
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mazaa aaya parh kar 
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nahi,bill aya..k ye kya perrh lia 
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sorry i wanted to write " Hun Arram aye "