Surd Haath..

system · January 15, 2003, 5:53pm

Aaj shub-e-tunhayi main
palkooN pe sitarey sajaye
ghum ki chookhut per baith ker
sooch rahi hoon
jub main ney us key haath ko chu’a tha
tu wo
muskara ker bola tha
“tumharey haath kitney garum hain
aur jaanti hoo
garum haath wafa ki alamut hotey hain”
ye sun ker main itni khush howi
kay baki hur baat bhool gayi
aur aaj mujhey yaad aa raha hai
kay Us kay haath kitnay surd thay..

arifnawaz1 · January 15, 2003, 6:24pm

**
Tu woh muskara ker bola tha
“tumharey haath kitney garum hain
aur jaanti hoo garum haath wafa ki alamut hotey hain”
ye sun ker main itni khush howi
kay baki hur baat bhool gayi
aur aaj mujhey yaad aa raha hai
kay Us kay haath kitnay surd thay..**

***** Vivacious *** **

:k::k::k:
Thanks for sharing

Dilsay · January 15, 2003, 6:29pm

This is beautiful....

system · January 15, 2003, 6:32pm

^ thanx alot Arif bahi & Dilsey

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · January 15, 2003, 6:54pm

Nice:)

chand_chehra · January 15, 2003, 7:02pm

:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 15, 2003, 7:29pm

bohut khoob:k::k:
thanks for sharing:)

Lamhay · January 16, 2003, 7:52am

bahut khoob!

_Masoom_Muskaan · January 16, 2003, 7:55am

nice:):k:

aadhoorighazal · January 17, 2003, 12:18am

vivacious its a very beautiful poem,and you know what??? poetry aside, this proverb is even true in real life.

XChorniX · January 17, 2003, 12:32am

so nice n true

NikamiJano · January 17, 2003, 1:11am

Re: Surd Haath..

:k:

thanks 4 sharin..

Jaan_Lewaa · January 18, 2003, 12:43am

Re: Surd Haath..

bhut achay:k:

Azad · January 18, 2003, 3:28am

hummm to apnay qatil say haat bhi milana hota hay

Galaxy · January 18, 2003, 3:30am

pasand aayi:)

Dragon_King · January 18, 2003, 8:18am

nice :k:

system · January 18, 2003, 8:37pm

Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Alot guys.............. :)

nikii · January 18, 2003, 10:07pm

wowww :k: