suR he na milay jis maiN wo saaz badal daalo

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal February 2, 2011, 10:42pm 1

taskeeN na ho jis se
wo raaz badal da’lo
jo raaz na rakh paa’ey
wo hamRaaz badal daa’lo

tum ne bhi suni ho ghi
baRi aa’m kahawat hai
***anjaam ka ho khatRa ***
***tu aagaaz badal daa’lo

puR soz dilooN ko jo
muskaaN na day paa’ey
suR he na milay jis maiN
***wo saaz badal daa’lo ***

***aiy dost kaRo himat ***
kuch dooR savaiRa hai
gaR chaa’hatey ho manzil
paRwaaz badal daa’lo

UZ February 2, 2011, 10:46pm 2

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Koyal kaya baat hai very very nice :k:

Amal February 2, 2011, 11:19pm 3

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Kya baat hey Koyal ji… kamaal kar dia aap ney to k:

Aryaan February 2, 2011, 11:54pm 4

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Bohat Khoob** Koyal**..:k:

Koyal February 3, 2011, 4:21am 5

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thanks

Koyal February 3, 2011, 4:22am 6

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jo kuch nahi kartey wo kamal kartey hain

Koyal February 3, 2011, 4:23am 7

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tha ks uz and Ayaan

pktun February 6, 2011, 11:07am 8

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Wow Nyc

Koyal February 6, 2011, 12:35pm 9

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thanks :)

fara February 6, 2011, 4:19pm 10

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Nice one...

HeArT_HaCKeR February 6, 2011, 4:23pm 11

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:) Nice 0ne

Daanie February 8, 2011, 8:53am 12

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buhut khoob :)

Koyal February 10, 2011, 2:15am 13

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thanks fara

thanks HH

thanks daniee