Salam arz hai, bohat zabardast ghazal hai, agar ye aap hi ki ghazal hai to baRi baat hai. Keep writing. Itni ba-wazan aur aa'la ghazal mein cHoTi moTi c do chaar ghalatiyaaN theeN jo mujhse bardaasht nahi hueeN so main ne aap ki ijaazat k baghair hi is mein corrections kar d hain, here it is;
Ghazal
Dil ki chaukhaT pe jo ik deep jala rakha hai
Tere lauT aane ka imkaan saja rakha hai
Saans tak bhi nahi lete hain tujhe sochte waqt
Ham ne is kaam ko bhi kal pe uTha rakha hai
RooTh jaate ho to kuch aur haseeN lagte ho
Hum ne ye soch k hi tum ko khafa rakha hai
Tum jise rota hua cHoR gaye they ik din
Ham ne us shaam ko seene se laga rakha hai
Chain lene nahi deta ye kisi taur mujhe
Teri yaadoN ne jo tufaan utha rakha hai
Jaane waale ne kaha tha k wo lauT aaye ga
Ik isi aas pe darwaaza khula rakha hai
Tere jaane se jo ik dhool uThi thi gham ki
Ham ne us dhool ko aankhoN mein basa rakha hai
Mujh ko kal shaam se wo yaad bohat aane laga
Dil ne muddat se jo ik shakhs bhula rakha hai
Aakhri baar jo aaya tha mere naam peghaam
Mein ne is khat ko kalejey se laga rakha hai ------- Khush rahiye
JaaN KaR KYuN MuJhe Woh SaTaaTe Rahe
KYuN SaDa Hi MeRa DiL JaLaTe Rahe
PYaaR Ki Rah MaiN SilSiLa Yeh Raha
RooThTe Woh Rahe HuM MaNaTe Rahe
Raat BhaR YaaD MaiN Un Ki Rote Rahe
HaR GaDhi Jo HuMeiN Bas SaTaaTe Rahe
AaG AiSi LaGi ZinDaGi MaiN Ke HuM
BaS BuJhaTe Rahe Bas BuJhaTe Rahe
KaT GaYi UmaR AuRoN Ko KhuSh RaKhNe MaiN
LoG The Ke MeRa DiL DuKhaTe Rahe
PhooL Ne KaR DiYa HuM Ko ZaKhMi BaHut
HuM To KaNtoN Se DaaMaN BaChaTe Rahe
Us Ne De Ke DaGha HuM Ko ApNa KaHa
AuR HuM The Ke BaaToN MaiN Aate Rahe
KaR DiYa Us Ne RuSwaa BhaRi BaZm MaiN
RaaZ-E-DiL HuM JiSe SaB BaTaaTe Rahe
KiTNe NaaDaaN The Jo SaMaJh Na Sake
KhuWaaB Ki NeeW Pe GhaR BaNaaTe Rahe
ZinDaGi Ne DeKhaYeiN Bahut TalKhiYaaN
PhiR Bhi NaGhMeiN KhuShi Ke Hi GaaTe Rahe
DaRD-O-GhaM SaRe ApNe ChuPaTe HoYe
MuSkuRate Rahe MuSkuRaate Rahe..................
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aur agar nahin kya to wah kya baat hai:lajawab: