**naaraaz hone kaa itnaa lambaaaaa ai'laan e aam...jise naaraaz honaa hotaa hai vo bataaye baGhaire naaraaz ho jaataa hai and i hate those types...
achchhii nazam hai par zaraa chhoTii hai aur ta'assur kam kam hii chhoRtii hai...force kam lagaa baat kahne meN...ek baat ko zaraa aur bahtar pairaaye meN kahii jaa saktii thii...pataa nahiiN k shaa'ir kaun hai...i hope k koi mustanad shaa'ir nahiiN hogaa :(**
**naaraaz hone kaa itnaa lambaaaaa ai'laan e aam...jise naaraaz honaa hotaa hai vo bataaye baGhaire naaraaz ho jaataa hai and i hate those types...
achchhii nazam hai par zaraa chhoTii hai aur ta'assur kam kam hii chhoRtii hai...force kam lagaa baat kahne meN...ek baat ko zaraa aur bahtar pairaaye meN kahii jaa saktii thii...pataa nahiiN k shaa'ir kaun hai...i hope k koi mustanad shaa'ir nahiiN hogaa :(**
Hashmat g kuch Allah da khouf karo .... ittni lambi to hay .... i love short poem as its easy to understand and remember ....... me nay tou yah nazam bhi 4 din mein ja kar prahi thi aur bhi Maya nay kaha that zaroor parhani hay ;)
Hashmat g kuch Allah da khouf karo .... ittni lambi to hay .... i love short poem as its easy to understand and remember ....... me nay tou yah nazam bhi 4 din mein ja kar prahi thi aur bhi Maya nay kaha that zaroor parhani hay ;)
**lol...ok ji...kar liyaa :)
Khauf e Khudaaii, haaye re haaye!
maang duhaaii dhoom machaaye
dar_asl, yeh mauzoo zar_Khez hai aur bahr cchhoTii hai is liye kaafii kii gunjaaish thii...tashnagii rah gai. Khair...pasand apnii apnii, Khayaal apnaa apnaa :)
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