Suno Kia Khayal Hai ?

[Sheal]

Probably my last post.

Suno kabhi youn karain keh
Kaheen mil baith kay koi udass or sogwar sham dohrai’n
or beetnay na dain - or khud ko bholi bisri
Yadoon kay supurd ker k vapis lotna bhool jain
Ya kisi jungle main ja kay khud ko parindoon ki
Qaid main day aain
Kisi tan - o - tanha badal ko bulain or usay
Hameesha hameesha apnay her rakh lain
Or gher k saray dareechay saray rastay
Band ker dain takeh koi usay milnay na aa sakay
Apni apni zakhmi arzo’on ko zakhmi hi rehnay dain
Or aik dosray ki khwab nagriyoo’n ko rawana
Ker k rasta na bhoolnay ki dua mangain
Kisi roz apnay apnay piyaroon say bay sabab
Naraz ho jain or jahan jahan say
Jo jo wada likh rakha hai mitta dalain
Suno kia khyal hai
Kabhi youn na karain k hosloon k saray band or
Tahamul k saray satoon tor dalain or hawaoon k samnay
In kathoor hawaoon k samnay !
Dewar ban k kharay ho jain unhain rok ker
Un ka giraybaan thamain or cheekh cheekh ker
Unhain bura bhala kahain - or -
or - un say apna jurm poochain!
Suno kia khyal hai…?

AQ hamesha ki trha mujhay is poet ka bhi naam nahi maloom :(.

[SJ]

Re: Suno Kia Khayal Hai ?

Lovely Poem …
Bohat khoob sis…

[deep_ocean]

Re: Suno Kia Khayal Hai ?

Probably my last post. :)

Suno kabhi youn karain keh Kaheen mil baith kay koi udass or sogwar sham dohrai'n or beetnay na dain - or khud ko bholi bisri Yadoon kay supurd ker k vapis lotna bhool jain Ya kisi jungle main ja kay khud ko parindoon ki Qaid main day aain Kisi tan - o - tanha badal ko bulain or usay Hameesha hameesha apnay her rakh lain Or gher k saray dareechay saray rastay Band ker dain takeh koi usay milnay na aa sakay Apni apni zakhmi arzo'on ko zakhmi hi rehnay dain Or aik dosray ki khwab nagriyoo'n ko rawana Ker k rasta na bhoolnay ki dua mangain Kisi roz apnay apnay piyaroon say bay sabab Naraz ho jain or jahan jahan say Jo jo wada likh rakha hai mitta dalain Suno kia khyal hai Kabhi youn na karain k hosloon k saray band or Tahamul k saray satoon tor dalain or hawaoon k samnay In kathoor hawaoon k samnay ! Dewar ban k kharay ho jain unhain rok ker Un ka giraybaan thamain or cheekh cheekh ker Unhain bura bhala kahain - or - or - un say apna jurm poochain! Suno kia khyal hai........?

AQ hamesha ki trha mujhay is poet ka bhi naam nahi maloom :(.

Khairiat to hai :)

P.S. nice sharing :)

[Bholay_Bisray]

Re: Suno Kia Khayal Hai ?

*Lovely Poem, but why it will be last one? *

[Prince_Ali]

Re: Suno Kia Khayal Hai ?

**why last post???

nice poem btw :k:**

[babri]

Re: Suno Kia Khayal Hai ?

Very nice poem sheal. why its your last post kiya hum se koi galti ho gi hai? agar ho gi hai toh main GS ki taraf se maafi magta hoon. and plz stay here, shar your poetry with us. have a nice life there and here also on GS. best of luck.

[tum_bin_1]

Re: Suno Kia Khayal Hai ?

Very Nice :)

[being_lonely]

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Sab Tareefein Apni Jagah Par Aap Ne Koi WaadA kia Tha Mujhse bas baat he mat kijiye hum se ~

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: Suno Kia Khayal Hai ?

:halo:

last post kyu

[being_lonely]

Re: Suno Kia Khayal Hai ?

I hate This Emotion Now aap ne to baaki adicted ppl ki tarah kaam he bana lia free mein yeh icon post karnay ka

[glamorous]

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[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: Suno Kia Khayal Hai ?

@being_lonely

I hate This Emotion Now aap ne to baaki adicted ppl ki tarah kaam he bana lia free mein yeh icon post karnay ka

excuse me

PS

[redidentity]

Re: Suno Kia Khayal Hai ?

Awesome.. :)

[redidentity]

Re: Suno Kia Khayal Hai ?

Sheal.. Tusi Ja Rahay Ho..

[babri]

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sheal app ne koi post plz sheal app maat jao ache doston ko chorna achi baat nahi hai. hope app jaldi koi nai post karo gi.

[Dushwari]

Re: Suno Kia Khayal Hai ?

nice poem Sheal.

dushwari

[Amal]

Re: Suno Kia Khayal Hai ?

@Sheal

Probably my last post.

Suno kabhi youn karain keh
Kaheen mil baith kay koi udass or sogwar sham dohrai’n
or beetnay na dain - or khud ko bholi bisri
Yadoon kay supurd ker k vapis lotna bhool jain
Ya kisi jungle main ja kay khud ko parindoon ki
Qaid main day aain
Kisi tan - o - tanha badal ko bulain or usay
Hameesha hameesha apnay her rakh lain
Or gher k saray dareechay saray rastay
Band ker dain takeh koi usay milnay na aa sakay
Apni apni zakhmi arzo’on ko zakhmi hi rehnay dain
Or aik dosray ki khwab nagriyoo’n ko rawana
Ker k rasta na bhoolnay ki dua mangain
Kisi roz apnay apnay piyaroon say bay sabab
Naraz ho jain or jahan jahan say
Jo jo wada likh rakha hai mitta dalain
Suno kia khyal hai
Kabhi youn na karain k hosloon k saray band or
Tahamul k saray satoon tor dalain or hawaoon k samnay
In kathoor hawaoon k samnay !
Dewar ban k kharay ho jain unhain rok ker
Un ka giraybaan thamain or cheekh cheekh ker
Unhain bura bhala kahain - or -
or - un say apna jurm poochain!
Suno kia khyal hai…?

AQ hamesha ki trha mujhay is poet ka bhi naam nahi maloom :(.

Very nice poem Sheal :k: And hope it’s not your last one